Hi all, I have my obssession on Ty now so please read this (I am rubbish at writing so please post your scores and READ it, not skim it like some people *COUGHkdtwCOUGH*) Thanks!

On with the story:-

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Ty the Tasmanian Tiger Adventures
Story 1: Curse of the Midnight Billabong

1. Introduction

It was late Monday afternoon and two Tasmanian tiger mothers were walking their children in the park. The sandy floor was bright, there were no clouds, it was a perfect day for two friends to go for a walk. The usual Australian sun was glaring away and the young children were climbing, jumping and playing in the park just opposite the Billabong. It was a great place for couples to go at night and was extremely beautiful, sunset and sunrise. One of the mother

Ok...Firstly, it's one story. The introduction was a....well....introduction to the story!

Second, I've put the Speech on another line every time someone else speaks.

Here are a few of the character's basic profiles to give you some info on them)

Ty - Wears hawaiian swim shorts and caries a boomerang. Orangey coloured fur and a long tuft of hair at the front of his head. Always ready for action and determined to let good be done.

Shazza - Ty's trusted friend. She's always there for him and up for a laugh. Wears shorts and a top and has yellowish hair which usually covers one eye and orange fur.

Sly - Ty's long lost brother. After defecting from Boss Cass, he is always helping Ty and runs a Boomerang Shack in the middle of the outback. Wears fingerless gloves and biker outfit. Darker fur than Ty and used to battle with the Doomerang, a contollable boomerang which explodes on impact. Known as the "local bad boy" even though he has changed his evil ways.

Mum and Dad - Looking out for Ty all the while, lost in the Dremland when they fought Boss Cass many years ago. They work in a Rang Shop in Burramudgee town and favour Sly for coming to good.

Naomi - Hippy possum who loves music. Not very adventurous. Friendly and wears bright coloured khaki trousers and t-shirt.

Julius - Inventive koala who is a genius. Invents new rangs for Sly and upgrades Race Karts for a living. Loyal to Ty and wears lab coat and glasses.

Lenny - A Lyrebird which the name is all it's cracked up to be, he lies. A lot. Don't believe anything he says.

Boss Cass - Evil mastermind turkey. Used Sly to get power over Ty and the Bush Rescue but Sly turned back on him and overthrew him yet again.

Dennis - A treefrog who collects Thunder Eggs, a rare type of rock. Very rich and opened up a memoiral road across a lake for himself, wears Captain of a ship's clothes.

3. Sly

Thanks for actually reading it. If it weren't for you, I'd be stuck and wouldn't write.

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4. Frills Skills
Ty looked up and felt the Australian breeze whisp through his fur. He closed his eyes again but suddenly there was a hard jolt and the Fourbie (Shazza

very cool its like a mini tv showafter the game.9/10