Taelia blinked. "What's going on?" she thought. There were trees everywhere. She felt grass under her. "Please wake up" a voice said. Taelia didn't budge. "Please wake up" the voice said again. Taelia got up. "Oh thank goodness!" the voice said. "Um...where am I?" Taelia asked. "Oh? You don't know where you are?" the voice which seemed to be a cyndaquil. "Well I'll tell you. Your in the Tiny Woods. I'm Shila. Who are you?" "I-I'm Taelia" the pikachu said. "Well...that's a funny name!" "Hey! Anyway... why am I here? I'm a Human!" "A what?" Shila asked. "A Human" Taelia said. "They're creatures that care for pokemon like you" "Hahaha! That's the sillyest thing i've ever heard!" Shila said. Taelia scurried around. "HELP!!!" a butterfree yelped. "Huh? Oh...you need help. Well ok." " My baby! He fell down a hole...he's just too young to crawl up..." "Ok! We'll do it!" Taelia said, heading towards the entrance. "Whoah...this is cool..." Taelia said. "Yah...I think it is too." Shila said heading down the stairs. "Look! There he is!" The caterpie sniffled. "Waahh..." He cryed. "C'mon..." Shila said. The caterpie crawled towards Taelia and Shila. They picked him up. They carried him up to his mother. She smiled. "Oh thank you..." she said. She gave them 3 berries. "Thank you!" Taelia said. They ran to the team base. Taelia smiled and entered the team base. She laid down on her bed to rest. Tomorrow would be another wonderful day doing adventures with Shila.

Thats a great story it takes place as if it were mystery dungeon,I like it.

It's good indeed, but the lack of paragraphs make me cry.

The paraghraphing is atrocious, but the story is good. I'd give it a... Sorry, but the world famous KyogreKing scale is having technical problems, please try again tommorrow.