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Crimson
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Sun May 07, 2006 2:33 pm
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Location: USA EST
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This is the last of my doll stories. It's also short. I hope you enjoy it and comment. Oh and, if you read 'Blind to Reality' I'm sure you noticed that they share a similar beginning. The reason would be that I originally wrote 'Blind to Reality' for school but since it didn't fit the criteria I had to write another story. I just liked the first sentence so I used it again.
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One Last Dream
People always say doll eyes are dead; I think they, unlike people
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Birdknight
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Thu Mar 30, 2006 4:47 am
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mudkipman
Ace Trainer
Joined: Sat May 27, 2006 1:26 am
Posts: 389
Location: Hiding behind a rock 'cuz you're ugly
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aww.............I am sad about two things:
First, that story was a (like all your stories) extremely creative and sad. Seriously, that one made me feel depressed for the rest of the day..............no just joking. I really liked your story though.
Secondly: the last of your doll stories? I really enjoy them, I find them creative and a real pleasure to read.....
Well, good job with all of your fanfics, and this one is my fav.
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Treeckomaster
Fails at life
Joined: Mon Mar 26, 2007 12:07 pm
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Location: The Forums official moronic epic fail.
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That's it? No more doll stories. 
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Crimson
Pokemon Ranger
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There is Irene that you may've read but didn't comment on. But I've no way of telling that.
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StevensNightmare
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Fri Mar 09, 2007 2:56 am
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Whoa, her mother accidentally killed her daughter.
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Crimson
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Sun May 07, 2006 2:33 pm
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That is what's implied...
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Treeckomaster
Fails at life
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Slightly depressing....
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Crimson
Pokemon Ranger
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I have said I don't write happy stories.
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Ghost Writer
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Joined: Wed Mar 14, 2007 6:45 pm
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Location: Searching for the place all the Abra teleport to. I'm going to crash their party.
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Though I haven't commented on any of your stories before, I think that since this is your last one I should at least say my opinion. I'm sad this is your last one, but it is really good.
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Crimson
Pokemon Ranger
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I think everyone is horribly confused as to which story of mine this is. This story is old. I wrote this ages ago and posted it back in 2006. In total I've written 4 doll stories, Dianna was much later than the other three. So when I posted the other three way back when, this was the last of them then. Afterwards at some point I wrote Dianna.
I wrote many more stories after this one and my other doll stories. This was not my last story; when I had posted it, this had been my last doll story. If you go to the Library thread I made for all of my stories you'd see this one near the bottom of the list.
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