Everyday or week I am going to add more poke poems. Also can people who read my poems rate them. Here are my first three poems.

DRAGONITE
Dragonite roams around
From top to bottom and on the ground.
He also flies in the sky
Helping people who pass by.
He is a sea guardian, a shining king
Something nice to always bring.
Happy, kind, the perfect one
The pokemon that brings us fun.

JIRACHI

Jirachi is a star,
A pokemon who has come so far.
To sleep for a thousand years
And to comfort people who have tears.
A pokemon so gentle and bright
A star that glows through the night.
Granting wishes, bringing hope
Giving us the courage to always cope.

Tyrannitar

Tyrannitar roars so loud
Angry, hungry, lots of sound.
Hyper beam with a blast
A pokemon not very fast.
Though no speed he has power
So much power to devour.
His sandstorm rage leaves pokemon scared
And Tyrannitar's anger frightengly flares.

Heh...Nice poetic flair. Describing Pokemon's unique qualities and stringing it together in a clever rhyme? Yeah!

4.7/5

Here's my next poems.....

Bulbasaur

Bulbasaur is so green
His eyes are so very keen.
The pretty seed on his back
Looks very much like a backpack.
The cute look on his face
Is full of love and grace.
But in battle he is strong
Nearly as strong as King Kong.

Charmander

Charmander is like fire
A heart burning with desire.
Strong, willing very cute
Tough in power, Height-Minute.
Determined, keen always ready to battle
His power rages and loudy rattles.
Cute at first then so strong
To pick another pokemon would be wrong.

Squirtle
Squirtle is a turtle so tough
His shell on his back is very rough.
He has strong protection in his shell as he hides
It is so sad when you see him cry.
Keen, fun always there
Ready to battle an Ursaring bear.
Strong in spirit, strong at heart
A partnership with this pokemon will be hard to part.

Caterpie

Caterpie is a bug
Caterpie looks like grub.
He is green and very rough
But he doesn't look very tough.
Very small, very minute
Not really very cute.
Scaring Misty is what he does
Though he doesn't ever buzz.

Weedle
Weedle has a short horn
His body looks very torn
Poison sting is what he can do
But he can never moo
Wriggle, jiggle is what he's like
But he can't ride a trike
Weird and brown is he
Nearly similar to Caterpie

I like the way you wrote it! The rhyming works, but the use of words in the rhyme is kinda babyish, there's definately room for improvement. But hey! No one's perfect, and it's better rhyming than I could do! (I consider myself good at stories, poems, etc., but I never got the hang of rhyming!) I'd give it a 7.5-8.5 out of ten on the world famous KyogreKing scale!

Yeah, I do agree with you on that point KyogreKing but babyish words rhyme so much easier than a long, scientific word such as deoxyribonucleic acid (DNA). Off topic but the pokemon Deoxys comes from the word DNA.

Yah! Someone finally agreed with my ratings! Still, it is better tham my rhyming (I have verbal proof from my teacher that I should leave rhyming alone...). Please write more!



Hey, it does to!

Here's the next set.....

LUCARIO

Lucario is blue
A pokemon very new.
The Aura Guardian so strong
Able to defeat King Kong.
Obedient and respectful
Not very forgetful.
He's tough as stone
Able to break a phone.
A glow of faith, courage, hope and love
A resemblence inside of what represents the dove.

Kyogre

Kyogre is the ruler of the sea
The King of any possibility.
He may attack or flee
He may defend or leave.
Kyogre had a battle
With his fins he seems to paddle.
To whip up a whirlpool
To keep his cool
That's the story of Kyogre
Maybe he should have a fight with Koga?

(I had some trouble with these poems and I don't think that they are very good compared to my other ones)

Couldn't resist saying something again! Yes, the words are again kinda babyish, as if you had a writers block, but in general they're still good! Lucario... My second fave pokemon! Do my favourite one next! Jolteon!

P.S. I hate Kyogre. He is not my fave. Surpised? Hehehehe...

To bring the request of TheKyogreKing I have made poems of Jolteon and two other LG/FR eeveeloutions. If you want a poem about a certain
pokemon just post the pokemon and I'll make a poem about it.

JOLTEON
Jolteon is the shining thunder
His speed will make him plunder.
Quick on his feet and furry paws
Static on his powerful jaws.
One of the eeveeloutions, a hero
Mighty as ancient King Nero
A crackle and blast
Thunder he casts
Cute in his face and deceiving eyes
His electric energy will make you fry.

FLAREON

Flareon is an inferno blaze
His flames will create smoke and haze.
Fiery at both heart and attacking
His smoke and haze will become blacking.
Beware of this eeveeloution of fire and flash
As Flareon will instantly start to lash.
Determined to win and never to lose
Out of the eeveeloutions what one will you choose?

VAPOREON

Vapereon is majestic as ice
The cuteness of he will make you enticed.
Always swaying his enchanting tail
To make you believe he will never fail.
Body of water, quenched with H20
His strength might show a strong K-O
Looks like a mermaid swimming in the sea
Swimming beautiful, majestically.

(I believe that these are much better compared to yesterday's ones)

Me again! Boy, you must be getting bord of me now! What point are the Eeveelutions without the actual Eevee! Do Eevee next! And Latias! The rhyming was much better that time!

EEVEE
Eevee stands for peculiar and unique
His furry body and his courageous face makes him chic.
Glamourous but plain with a rusty brown
Though this unusual colour he never frowns.
Sweet and mild-tempered is his personality
The colour of his fur looks like a weird resemblence of neutrality.
Though so different from his brothers
He can turn out to be lots of different colours.

LATIAS

Latias is a mystical dragon
You may see a resemblence with him and Eragon.
If you can't see it look deep inside
For the qualities in the heart are there with pride.
You also might see another resemblence too
Red and brown look the same, do you think too?
Last but not least he is good at heart
Another resemblence with Eragon, do they share a part?

LATIOS
The brother of Latias, is he the same?
Just a different colour, just a differnet name.
But is he more powerful in every way?
You can find out if you buy Pokemon Emerald right now today.
And is he more larger and bigger in size?
Yes, that's a fact and he rarely cries.
Do they have a difference in level and form?
Maybe, you look, it may come to you like a storm.

Oh yes. Nice rhyming there then. I'm kinda lousy with rhyming too so this is better than the best I could do, although Latias is not a "he". Latias is a "she".

TheKyogreKing hates Kyogre? Surprising...Why would anyone hate Kyogre?

5/5, elusivedragonite!

More! More! Do Blaziken next! And if you can, do Buizel (#418). But cause hes a 4th gen., he might be harder...
Edit: Goody!

P.S. I'm only called TheKyogreKing cause I couldn't think of a better name at the time, and 4th gens weren't out yet... And Kyogre is a blubbery whale with a feathery tail, and a mouth that when open, makes him look like a blubbero-shark!

Here's my next set...

BLAZIKEN

Blaziken will set you a blaze
He will force you into a fiery maze.
He will flare and flame up for a fearsome fight
To his advantage he likes the sunlight.
When facing a tougher opponent he flares even more
Having the energy and power of the Earth's core.
Inferno blasts will he make
If weaker opponents try to fight, they maybe are making a mistake.

BUIZEL
Buizel is an aquatic sea weasel
His species sounds a lot like measles.
His weakness are sparks
You might see him in a lake at the park.
Very swift when raining
Is he swift when training?
Is he the same, or does he glow in the night?
Also, is his brain very bright?

(Again, yes the Buizel one was hard as I didn't really have lots of info about it but it was ok).

ROSERADE
Roserade is a blooming flower
In battle she has a lot of power.
Grasswhistle to make you fall into a deep sleep
You won't get this pokemon very cheap.
Solarbeam, the beam really is damaging
As she goes on rampaging.
Her sweet and suculent scent of roses entice you even more
What is the source of her power, is it in her core?


ROSELIA
Roselia is a suculent, seducing plant
Her sweet, sweet grace will enchant.
She will entice you with her seducing smell
The sound of the most magical bells.
Though fire does damage her great
Her heart of sympathy is a trait.
To always have courage but always stay shy
Quiet, serene, just twirling by.

BUDEW
Budew is a minute but cute flower bud
Not very dirty, doesn't like mud.
Natural cure is it's ability
In harmony with tranqulity.
Though not immune to anything
It looks like a bell that goes dong and ding.
A peaceful state it is always in
Never ever think to throw it in the bin!

AWESOME, dragonite

5/5

May I reccomend Umbreon, Espeon and Furret?


Ps: do you remember me from your shop?

It's great, elusivedragonite! 5/5 . I like the roselia poem. If you can, do a Muk poem for me.

You're probably the best Pokemon poet ever, ElusiveDragonite !

How about a poem about Lapras ? Please, please ?

Ok. Here it is.

UMBREON
Umbreon is a mysterious creature, lurking through the dark
He is very peculiar, his bite is better than his bark.
His rings on his body shines in the moonlight
His serene, but weird sense will give you a fright.
Don't ever miss a chance to see this misty pokemon that is strong
As Umbreon is a rarity, a beauty, so to choose another pokemon would be wrong.
But be careful if you dare, to train and tame this pokemon of fright.
He might entice you to become a trainer in the night.

ESPEON
Espeon is strong in sprit and in power
Rememeber that in battle he will devour.
His love and friendship with his trainer will prove to be a challenging battle
Espeon's way of grace, love but strength will always flatter
His protection is only worthy of trainers that are so high
Only the trainers that have power to rise to the sky.
So when you see an Espeon train it will love and care
Because if you don't, it might vanish like a flare.

FURRET
Furret is a furry creature that was made for love and care
Though you might think he is puny and weak he has the power to tear
His brown and white colours may make you think he is just ordinary
But in a fearsome battle he will prove to you extraordinary.
Never ever fail to train and capture this grace
For it might prove to you to be like a powerful mace.
So never ever think that is pokemon can't handle the pressure.
Because between other pokemon, Furret wins the measure.

MUK
His name gives it all to tell
Doesn't Muk ring a bell?
His purple blobs will make people sick
That's why Team Rocket loves this pokemon to the tick
His awful scent fills the room and in time the house or hotel
That's why people want to get out of the room and get clean oygen to smell.
But even though he is a disadvantage in life
In battle he will cause the opponent strife.

LAPRAS
Lapras is a heavenly gift
It's magnificent and so graceful in water that also can lift.
It's enchanting, magical eyes entices you to come on board
Seducing and lovable as it is people are pulling the cord.
They make it suffer and drive it nearly to the point of extinction
Why would anyone want this majestic pokemon in depletion?
Why, now I will remember to never forget this gift of serenity.
We should always try to live with this pokemon in harmony.

Lapras was the hardest I would have to say. Keep on requesting please! It's fun!:)

Do Dusclops and Ariados.

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Better! Better! More! More! When you have the time, can you please do Shaymin or Glaceon (not both, grass and ice don't like each other!), and Luxio, who I have a sudden attraction to.

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