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DragonDaithi Ace Trainer Joined: Sat Jan 14, 2006 11:09 am Posts: 311 Location: Bitcharoonydoony	Daithis sprite comic POKEMON:A NEW QUEST Back story: after the events in pokemon emerald raquaza groundon and kyogre are in hiding weak from there battle in sotoplos team rocket have begun searching for the pokemon and with news of this professer oak calls ash mist and brock and tells them to met him on mirage island Cast :Ash :Misty :Brock :Pikachu :Hiro :Brendan :Team Rocket Episodes: 1.A New Quest 2.Team Rocket 3.Sailing _________________ Last edited by DragonDaithi on Fri Aug 25, 2006 10:38 am, edited 3 times in total.
Tue Aug 22, 2006 11:25 am

lapras Ace Trainer Joined: Wed Jul 05, 2006 4:55 pm Posts: 461 Location: "We come all the way from the far country China, and we born you here just in America."	Cool... _________________ "Stealing is not excusable, for instance, you are in a museum and you decide that a certain painting would look better in your house, and you simply grab the painting and take it there. But if you were very, very hungry, and you had no way of obtaining money, it might be excusable to grab the painting, take it to your house, and eat it."
Tue Aug 22, 2006 7:17 pm

Mitch The Dragon Tamer Ace Trainer Joined: Wed Jun 07, 2006 11:20 am Posts: 274	i tohught mirage island dis and re apeared so how would they pick a time to meet on it....any way sound like a good plot..and good sprtes _________________ ERROR
Wed Aug 23, 2006 11:14 am

DragonDaithi Ace Trainer Joined: Sat Jan 14, 2006 11:09 am Posts: 311 Location: Bitcharoonydoony	thanks the first eposodes up _________________
Wed Aug 23, 2006 11:26 am

dragonite Pokemon Ranger Joined: Sun Jun 04, 2006 7:39 pm Posts: 796 Location: San Francisco	I dunno. Alot of gramatical mistakes, plus it was a little boring for some reason. Is this going to be a funny comic? Just wondering. _________________ [center][img]http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/766/bunnydv9.png[/img] [/center]
Wed Aug 23, 2006 1:23 pm

skurai_huginn Bug Catcher Joined: Wed Aug 23, 2006 5:31 am Posts: 10 Location: in my gym	ummmm hey all _________________ <center><img src="images/trainercards/skurai_huginn.png"></center>
Wed Aug 23, 2006 1:38 pm

Gardevoir1313 Pokemon Master Joined: Tue Jun 28, 2005 12:00 pm Posts: 1903 Location: Pennsylvania	dragonite wrote: I dunno. Alot of gramatical mistakes, plus it was a little boring for some reason. ^ Pretty much my view. _________________ The statement below is false The statement above is true
Wed Aug 23, 2006 3:59 pm

DragonDaithi Ace Trainer Joined: Sat Jan 14, 2006 11:09 am Posts: 311 Location: Bitcharoonydoony	Dont worry it will get beter and yes it will get funnier and as for the gramatical mistakes just try to ignore them anyway episode twos up _________________
Thu Aug 24, 2006 10:56 am

dragonite Pokemon Ranger Joined: Sun Jun 04, 2006 7:39 pm Posts: 796 Location: San Francisco	You should probably make an effort to fix them instead of trying to make us ignore them =/ I think you're moving too fast. And even though it's a comic, I could care less about your characters. Maybe give them more their own personality. _________________ [center][img]http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/766/bunnydv9.png[/img] [/center]
Thu Aug 24, 2006 1:31 pm

2x4b Pokemon Master Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:55 am Posts: 1456 Location: Stafford, UK	[color=#A37AEE]First. I'd like to thank you for mutilating the English language...
Thu Aug 24, 2006 1:42 pm

DragonDaithi Ace Trainer Joined: Sat Jan 14, 2006 11:09 am Posts: 311 Location: Bitcharoonydoony	Ok noted is episode3 any beter? _________________
Fri Aug 25, 2006 10:29 am

dragonite Pokemon Ranger Joined: Sun Jun 04, 2006 7:39 pm Posts: 796 Location: San Francisco	I don't see episode 3. Could you put a link up? _________________ [center][img]http://img293.imageshack.us/img293/766/bunnydv9.png[/img] [/center]
Fri Aug 25, 2006 10:40 am

Kryten Pokemon Ranger Joined: Sat Apr 02, 2005 11:09 am Posts: 974 Location: England, UK 3497 Psybucks	Episode Three is a lot better than the first 2. I like the Clamperl when they're closed and then open in the next frame. My advice is not to have so many characters. I write a few stories for fun now and again and from experience, it's really hard to control them. Perhaps taking Brock and Misty out or giving them smaller roles would be easier. At the moment, Hiro, Ash and Brendan seem to work fine. I wouldn't include Team Rocket that often, after all, they are total noobs. Oh, and try to fix spelling mistakes, Clamperl only has one 'a' and could you put capitals where they should be? I know it takes more time but it's way worth it as it makes it neater and cooler. _________________
Fri Aug 25, 2006 10:59 am

DragonDaithi Ace Trainer Joined: Sat Jan 14, 2006 11:09 am Posts: 311 Location: Bitcharoonydoony	episode3 link is up _________________
Fri Aug 25, 2006 11:00 am

ceasethereal Pokemon Trainer Joined: Tue Aug 22, 2006 8:16 am Posts: 40 Location: Douglas, MA.	i think theyre all pretty good. keep it up i look forward to episode 4!
Mon Aug 28, 2006 10:32 am

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