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| Author: | DragonDaithi [ Tue Aug 22, 2006 11:25 am ] |
| Post subject: | Daithis sprite comic |
POKEMON:A NEW QUEST Back story: after the events in pokemon emerald raquaza groundon and kyogre are in hiding weak from there battle in sotoplos team rocket have begun searching for the pokemon and with news of this professer oak calls ash mist and brock and tells them to met him on mirage island Cast  :Ash
 :Misty
 :Brock
 :Pikachu
 :Hiro
 :Brendan
 :Team Rocket
Episodes: 1.A New Quest 2.Team Rocket 3.Sailing |
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| Author: | lapras [ Tue Aug 22, 2006 7:17 pm ] |
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Cool... |
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| Author: | Mitch The Dragon Tamer [ Wed Aug 23, 2006 11:14 am ] |
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i tohught mirage island dis and re apeared so how would they pick a time to meet on it....any way sound like a good plot..and good sprtes |
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| Author: | DragonDaithi [ Wed Aug 23, 2006 11:26 am ] |
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thanks the first eposodes up |
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| Author: | dragonite [ Wed Aug 23, 2006 1:23 pm ] |
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I dunno. Alot of gramatical mistakes, plus it was a little boring for some reason. Is this going to be a funny comic? Just wondering. |
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| Author: | skurai_huginn [ Wed Aug 23, 2006 1:38 pm ] |
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ummmm hey all |
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| Author: | Gardevoir1313 [ Wed Aug 23, 2006 3:59 pm ] |
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dragonite wrote: I dunno. Alot of gramatical mistakes, plus it was a little boring for some reason. ^ Pretty much my view. |
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| Author: | DragonDaithi [ Thu Aug 24, 2006 10:56 am ] |
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Dont worry it will get beter and yes it will get funnier and as for the gramatical mistakes just try to ignore them anyway episode twos up |
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| Author: | dragonite [ Thu Aug 24, 2006 1:31 pm ] |
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You should probably make an effort to fix them instead of trying to make us ignore them =/ I think you're moving too fast. And even though it's a comic, I could care less about your characters. Maybe give them more their own personality. |
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| Author: | 2x4b [ Thu Aug 24, 2006 1:42 pm ] |
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[color=#A37AEE]First. I'd like to thank you for mutilating the English language... |
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| Author: | DragonDaithi [ Fri Aug 25, 2006 10:29 am ] |
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Ok noted is episode3 any beter? |
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| Author: | dragonite [ Fri Aug 25, 2006 10:40 am ] |
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I don't see episode 3. Could you put a link up? |
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| Author: | Kryten [ Fri Aug 25, 2006 10:59 am ] |
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Episode Three is a lot better than the first 2. I like the Clamperl when they're closed and then open in the next frame. My advice is not to have so many characters. I write a few stories for fun now and again and from experience, it's really hard to control them. Perhaps taking Brock and Misty out or giving them smaller roles would be easier. At the moment, Hiro, Ash and Brendan seem to work fine. I wouldn't include Team Rocket that often, after all, they are total noobs. Oh, and try to fix spelling mistakes, Clamperl only has one 'a' and could you put capitals where they should be? I know it takes more time but it's way worth it as it makes it neater and cooler. |
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| Author: | DragonDaithi [ Fri Aug 25, 2006 11:00 am ] |
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episode3 link is up |
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| Author: | ceasethereal [ Mon Aug 28, 2006 10:32 am ] |
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i think theyre all pretty good. keep it up i look forward to episode 4! |
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