So... I got bored waiting for a friend to come back, so I made this:
The girl is Merle, one of my OC's (original characters; she's a hawk laguz; in other words, she has wings and can turn into a large hawk)). In a fanfic I'm working on, she and Eric (another OC; her best friend, a dragon laguz (he can turn into a dragon)) get somehow brought into the FMA world, and she can use alchemy. She attempts to do so; in so doing she fuses Eric with a snake, creating a chimera called the Lindbaena. She then has to find a way to turn him back, and to keep the other FMA characters from killing him.
(Lyrics are from the song "Wasteland" by 10 Years.)
So what do we think, hm?
Personally, I think the text should be moved around a bit, but otherwise, methinks it's good >>
I agree with you, the text should probably be moved around a bit, maybe add something into the middle to make it look less.... plain.
