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| Author: | RegalChillin [ Sun Oct 01, 2006 6:44 pm ] |
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[color=LightBlue]I've decided to share some of my works with the entire Psypoke community. Let's start this off with an older poem I wrote. It's -ok-, nothing very special, but I still like it, so I thought I would post it. It's called... - <center>Alone I thought I had something I thought it was true The only person I wanted Was You But I made a mistake My thoughts were wrong Even though I'm killed inside I have to be strong I shrug it off like nothing Nothing of a matter But in those few precious seconds My heart was shattered It's hard to face the truth When it |
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| Author: | Miasma [ Sun Oct 01, 2006 8:17 pm ] |
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That was a very deep poem, Regal. The whole rhythm of it was very well thought out and obviously from the heart...that is, I can really tell that you put some feeling into this poem, rather than just scrawling down a bunch of stanzas and calling it good. I'm impressed. Keep up the good work, man. 
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| Author: | AABM [ Mon Oct 02, 2006 8:36 am ] |
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<font color="999999">Fantastic! the poem, the rithm, the feeling, the sadness, everything is nice, good work man. 
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| Author: | comedianmasta [ Mon Oct 02, 2006 11:51 am ] |
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dude, it's good. ARe you going to stop posting in the Team Psyche thread and start in this one? You had some good one's in there. btw, this one is good. Keep it up dude. This is a good ide...... when I close down my red vs blue thread I should make one for mini stories. |
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| Author: | RegalChillin [ Mon Oct 02, 2006 5:06 pm ] |
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3 works I did today in school. I'll probably revise them and post the edited ones later on, so these are a rough draft of a sort. <center>Dreams Gazing into the soft night sky The clear, blazing stars shimmering in my eye A gentle breeze blows through my hair Embodied by my infinite care Laying outside on the iron swing The cool summer night stirs my dreams Content with letting time keep it's pace Wrapped into the fantasy of our first, warm embrace </center> ------------------------------------------------------------------- <center>Study The clock ticks slowly, a speed less favored Enduring the prison of which I have labored Idle hands to dull the mind Blissfully silent, the sole of it's kind </center> -------------------------------------------------------------------- *poof* |
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| Author: | AABM [ Mon Oct 02, 2006 7:10 pm ] |
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<font color="999999">hmm... what an interesting work, you have an apparent affinity for rapping your pen against the papers into deep sentenses out of everyday, sircumstances...I think :roll: Good job, dude!</font> |
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| Author: | Flarey [ Thu Oct 05, 2006 1:25 am ] |
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Nice work, Regal. I'm not really one for poetry but I can tell you're not awful 
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| Author: | Crimson [ Thu Oct 05, 2006 4:17 pm ] |
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Nice work Regal, I can't say much else because I have no real experience in poetry. |
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| Author: | sN0wBaLL [ Fri Oct 06, 2006 4:01 am ] |
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This topic has been cleaned up due to some, er, spamming going on. Please keep on topic from now on. In any case, since I'm here I might as well comment. I've not too well versed in literature or whatever, but I like your work. It's nice how the language is simplistic enough for all to understand and yet it retains some sophistication
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| Author: | RegalChillin [ Fri Oct 06, 2006 5:07 pm ] |
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Thanks for all the nice comments, and thanks for cleaning it up Snow. Always on the job
I don't have anything new right now, but I daresay I'll have something to edit in later. Btw: Woo 250! |
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| Author: | RegalChillin [ Tue Oct 24, 2006 2:41 pm ] |
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*bumped* <center>Unfocused I'm sitting in class The usual grind The world starts to drift Away from my mind I'm in my own place All I can see Are thoughts unreal A fantasy I linger for a bit In this peaceful place A very much needed Change of pace Reality pulls me back I bid dreams farewell And to what do I owe this disappointment The liberation of the bell </center> This was written in about the 6th grade I believe. If I remember correctly I was sitting in my Pre-Algebra class. Not as eloquent as some of my more recent work, but still worth noting. I found it just a few minutes ago under my bed, obviously stuffed under there after a long day at school... |
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| Author: | comedianmasta [ Tue Oct 24, 2006 2:58 pm ] |
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Hey, it's good. It kicks my poems out. I am really bad with poems. You should put some new things up, all these old things are great but I wish you'd show us your full potential. get what I mean.
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| Author: | RegalChillin [ Wed Nov 29, 2006 9:38 pm ] |
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Felt like I needed to write, so I let it spill out... <center> Memories Droplets of time fill up the glass Reflecting the shining memories of past Craving to recover what is now lost Enlightened to the pain of change's cost Looking back to wasted years A tempest conjured with sorrow’s tears Fearful as he watches the future unfold Emotions will remain forever uncontrolled </center> |
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