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Stories of Mew!
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Author:  mew da real suger baby [ Wed Feb 21, 2007 5:33 pm ]
Post subject:  Stories of Mew!
The baby woke up. The baby - Mew.

{mew}

Mew woke just as the sun broke out. Would it be a boy or a girl
or is it even genderless?

Ten years (and levels!) Later
Mew wondered what was going on. It was dark and there was something wrong... There was no one around...
And yesterday it had been heaving with pokemon.

Mew wondered what could have happened.

She heard a distant thump. It was getting louder and louder.
As it got closer, Mew saw the sillouhette of a pokemon in the distance.

It was her brother, Mewtwo! ......

{mewtwo}

Please do not copy this story.
Author:  Latiosdude [ Sun Feb 25, 2007 2:52 pm ]
Post subject: 
That is a real cliffhanger, so please keep writing.
Author:  mew da real suger baby [ Wed Mar 14, 2007 2:41 pm ]
Post subject: 
Ive been ill so i couldn't of added more to it
Author:  guthirog [ Thu Apr 05, 2007 7:34 am ]
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its not much
Author:  2x4b [ Thu Apr 05, 2007 7:50 am ]
Post subject:  Re: Stories of Mew!
mew da real suger baby wrote:
Please do not copy this story.


Who would want to?

You should try making your chapters longer and more detailed. Maybe add a bit more description.
Author:  Crunchy [ Thu Apr 05, 2007 4:12 pm ]
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mooxy wrote:
And, this topic has been necromanced (twice) :evil:
It should be locked...

No backseat moderating, thank you.

Besides, it can still be commented on. And to be truly breaking a rule, the member would have to post in a thread last posted in a year back.
Author:  Crimson [ Thu Apr 05, 2007 7:09 pm ]
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To my knowledge at least [which is limited since I'm not a mod] the necromancy rule is a lot more lenient in this forum since it can take a long time before someone actually posts. But, like I said, Charly and Galar would definitely know more about that than I do.

Anywho, mew...the only good thing I can really see is that you used proper grammar and spacing for forums.

mew wrote:
Please do not copy this story.

2x4b is right, there isn't really anything to copy, and nothing really worth the small effort of copying it. There's no depth to your story, and you used icons. Don't use them, unless you're being all clever and snazy like girog and using them as sketches for a journal [which you aren't]. This is a Pokemon site, we all know what Mew and Mewtwo look like, and even if we didn't we could just go to the main site and search it up. They're 2 of the most famous Pokemon, so it's hard to imagine a member of this site not knowing what either of them look like.
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