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Hi, If you want to read my new fic look at my latest post.


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Thu Nov 03, 2005 4:49 am
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its good,but a little much like the others :( 7.5/10

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Thu Nov 03, 2005 8:47 pm
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I've decided to tweek this fan-fic a bit, well I say a bit, I'm scrapping the whole idea of this fic and changing it to something more dark and mysterious, but also bright and funny.


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Xavier/Jamie.Is it just me or is anyone else in here also been in these 2 RPs?
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Mon Nov 21, 2005 5:48 pm
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Lol. 2x4b is Jamie. It's his character for everything! I'm willing to bet that he meets and falls in love with a Misty. :wink:

Nice first bit - it's good to see something even a bit different - he caught his own first Pokemon!

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Ok guys as I said before keep looking for that latest post.


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Tue Nov 22, 2005 3:41 am
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I must profess I am disappointed. The other Fanfic you wrote was superior in every way - this is turning into another n00b Pokemon Fanfic. What happened to the pristine grammer? The good sized sentences, the paragraphs? The beautiful flow and speed of the story? You've made me sad, Jamie.. :( I hope this is just a facade and the story will improve - I know you can do it :wink:

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CF I have to admit that I'm not brilliant at these types of fics, but hopefully it will improve.


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it's ok but a bit n00bishj like CF said

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I am changing the fic now, I know I said I'd do it earlier but I've been busy, so if you could try not to post too much as I'm doing this it would be much appreaciated

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*poof*


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Wed Nov 30, 2005 4:54 pm
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HELLO?! Can someone please read this and tell what they think! come on..... I'm cold and there are wolves after me.


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kryten2x4b wrote:
HELLO?! Can someone please read this and tell what they think! come on..... I'm cold and there are wolves after me.


:lol: Were you meaning literally or are you also referring to how Angela in Pokemon Roleplay is attacking your character!By the way, have you noticed we're the only ones keeping it alive?!


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Waaaaahhh!! I've read two paragraphis and if I could I'd be bawling! Noo!! Steven!! Agatha!! Noooo!!! Steven!! Waaahhh!!

*runs off crying*

((Don't worry, I'll come back and read the story later))

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Wow. This is a really dark story. I really like it though. It's well written, with an interesting plot and dialogue that makes me want more. 8/10

That's all I have time to write, school tomorrow.

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Bartimeus wrote:
Wow. This is a really dark story. I really like it though. It's well written, with an interesting plot and dialogue that makes me want more. 8/10

That's all I have time to write, school tomorrow.


You might want to know on Psypoke, only certain people can rate stories. Otherwise, you may accidently get this story locked!Just thought I'd warn you ahead of time.


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R2Breathe_fan wrote:
Bartimeus wrote:
Wow. This is a really dark story. I really like it though. It's well written, with an interesting plot and dialogue that makes me want more. 8/10

That's all I have time to write, school tomorrow.


You might want to know on Psypoke, only certain people can rate stories. Otherwise, you may accidently get this story locked!Just thought I'd warn you ahead of time.


Ever since the threads disappeared, regular users have been able to rate, but if you want to enforce this then yell at the other 20 members that rated too. :wink:

Regular users can rate, I've asked Mr. Minish when asking him if we should re-open the story rating thread, which was sadly a no. :(

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I think the FF is aces. Continue+Practise=Progress! Don't bother reading people's posts if they say "Ewwww It's noobish" or "Errr it's naff and it stinks like my grandma's socks", keep at it! (P.S. I actually read the story! My concentration span is about as much as a pie is safe in front of a fat kid!)

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*poof*


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Insanely awesome, but I think we lost a chunk. Go to Edit it, and at the bottom select the check-box marked "Disable HTML in this post". That'll stop it thinking that your Telepthy is HTML, making it in Italics, thus fixing the problem.

I love this story. Absolutely love it. And yay, my favourite character is safe! Well, one of the two. Where's James from Team Rocket? He's my other most favouritest character, apart from Steven

Awesome story. Eleven Thumbs Up.

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I realy like it oh and i love the thing about being cold and having wolves after you grandpa simpson influences us all


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It was pretty good keep on writing. :D

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