Here are the basics of this fic:
Characters: Turtwig, Piplup, Chimchar, Wurmple
Main setting: Eterna Forest
Plot: After a nightmare, Turtwig goes on an adventure to avenge his dad due to a terrible battle.
Chapter 1

Turtwig struggled. He couldn't remember how he got there, but he was in a middle of a battle with Arceus. Turtwig looked back to see Chimchar and Piplup lying down, fainted. He turned back to find out that he was about to get struck by a Hyper Beam. He closed his eyes to brace the attack. But for some strange reason, he felt like something didn't happen. Then he realized something.
It didn't hit him.
Did the attack miss? He slowly opened his eyes to see that he was in his house. He looked around. Turtwig saw his lamp broken, his blanket scrunched up and he found out that he fell off his bed. He got up on his legs, and went to have some breakfast.
As Turtwig entered the kitchen, he saw his mom crying.
"What's wrong?" Turtwig asked.
"Oh, Turtwig, there you are." his mom sighed in relief. "Thank Rayquaza you weren't with your dad."
"What do you mean?" He wondered.
"Well, let's just say that you won't be seeing your dad for a very long time."
"Lucky dad, gets to go on a vacation." Turtwig mumbled.
"No, no, nothing like that." his mom replied.
After thinking for a few seconds, he ran straight to his bedroom and cried.

It's okay, but nothing special. There have been multiple Fan-Fics with this same plot recently.

To tell you the truth, i'm just happy someone has finally learned to start a new paragraph whenver a new person speaks.

Chapter 2

After hearing Turtwig, Piplup came barging in.
"What's wrong?" Piplup asked. Turtwig didn't answer. "Turtwig? Hello?"
Turtwig suddenly stood up, as furious as ever. He walked out the door and out of Eterna Forest.
Piplup waddled out to Chimchar's house. "Chimchar!"
"What is it?" Chimchar asked. "Anything about TV?"
"No, but It's really important." Piplup replied.
"Then I don't want to hear it." Chimchar Stated.
"Turtwig left Eterna Forest. Is that not important to you?" Piplup asked.
"Oh my lord!" Chimchar yelled, "that IS important! Let's follow him."

Sorry for the double-post, but if no one is going to compliment, I suggest to head straight to...
Chapter 3

Meanwhile, Turtwig was walking through Jubilife City. He was starting to be afraid to see a lot of humans around due to the fact that he never been out of Eterna Forest before. Then he saw the most wonderful thing to set eyes on.
A fresh, ripe, juicy apple.
It was laying on a cart so high that he cannot reach it. He looked over to the left and saw a bench right beside it. Turtwig climbed up on the bench and got ready to jump. He just made it on top of the cart and snatched the apple. Then he heard a voice:
"Give me that apple!" Turtwig turned to see a human running after him. At that instant, he remembered the dream. He was so afraid that he dropped the apple and ran.
Panting, he escaped the city. Turtwig took a little nap by a tree.

"TV...TV..." Chamchar Breathed.
"Come on, you don't need to take THAT with you." Piplup remarked.
"I need TV to survive." Chimchar argued.
"But it'll be too...fine," Piplup gave up, "take it with you (I just want to see this.)"

I actually read all three chapters, and well...I'm rather bored. And to be honest I hadn't been going to post but I won't get into what spurred me to. I'm sure it's fairly obvious to those who know me.

Your grammar and spelling looks to be fairly good, so there won't be any issues between us there. You should double space your paragraphs, it's the only sure way to identify where a paragraph begins and ends on a forum.

There is little detail. The detail that is there is written rather dryly, and forced. It's more of you telling us what's happening versus showing us and allowing us to imagine some of it on our own. It's a hard concept to grasp, my best suggestion is to read works by advanced writers. Some of the authors that have been published, some sites are great sources as well.

The dialogue is robotic and the humor you've tried to add with Chimchar is...corny and not that amusing.

And now...for the reason I decided to post. *add dramatic music here*


Yeaaahhhh about this...the time span isn't too bad so I'm not going to say anything about the double post. My rule of thumb [remember I'm not a mod...] is about a week in between is fine and you were only a day off. No my concern is your...word choice by accident or not I feel I must...point it out to you. This site is not merely for 'complimenting,' or only giving praise, it's a rather naiive thought. It's for commenting which is both good and bad comments. Hopefully that's all I'll have to say about that.

Sorry, I'm not that good of story writer yet. I'll work on it.

Chapter 4

After the glorious nap, Turtwig woke up to a need for hunger. At the tree he was sleeping by, he saw delicious berries on the tree branch above him. Turtwig already knew he couldn't climb that high, so he thought of butting it. He was thinking about a bruise that he would get on his forehead, but that didn't matter to him now. All that mattered to him right now was to eat. Turtwig charged up and wailed the tree as hard as he could. He saw berries plummet to the ground.

(Food! Glorious FOOD!) Turtwig thought. All of a sudden, he heard a THUD behind the tree; not one, but five. He walked behind the tree and saw five Pokemon: Wurmple, Budew, Burmy, Heracross and Combee lying on top of each other.

The leader, (which happened to be Wurmple) stepped out. "I have a few questions for you. Question 1, did you see us in that tree?" it interrogated.

"No." Turtwig answered.

"Question tw--" Wurmple's question was cut off by an flamethrower attack.

Taking this into account, of course, I'd say it is not much better than OK. Sorry, but I have not read the other chapters, as Chapter 1 did not captivate me. Still, as Xeeros pointed out, I'm glad someone follows the new-paragraph-as-someone-new-speaks rule!

Um... I think he copyed Infernape lover who had copyed the roll play Riolu's adventure.Now I will duck.

*ducks at chair about to be thrown at him*

No offense but these are pretty short. (NO OFFENSE)