Heh...Nice poetic flair. Describing Pokemon's unique qualities and stringing it together in a clever rhyme? Yeah!
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| Author: | elusivedragonite [ Sat Mar 31, 2007 8:59 pm ] |
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Everyday or week I am going to add more poke poems. Also can people who read my poems rate them. Here are my first three poems. DRAGONITE Dragonite roams around From top to bottom and on the ground. He also flies in the sky Helping people who pass by. He is a sea guardian, a shining king Something nice to always bring. Happy, kind, the perfect one The pokemon that brings us fun. JIRACHI Jirachi is a star, A pokemon who has come so far. To sleep for a thousand years And to comfort people who have tears. A pokemon so gentle and bright A star that glows through the night. Granting wishes, bringing hope Giving us the courage to always cope. Tyrannitar Tyrannitar roars so loud Angry, hungry, lots of sound. Hyper beam with a blast A pokemon not very fast. Though no speed he has power So much power to devour. His sandstorm rage leaves pokemon scared And Tyrannitar's anger frightengly flares. |
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| Author: | DNA [ Sun Apr 01, 2007 4:14 pm ] |
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Heh...Nice poetic flair. Describing Pokemon's unique qualities and stringing it together in a clever rhyme? Yeah! 4.7/5
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| Author: | elusivedragonite [ Sun Apr 01, 2007 10:58 pm ] |
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Here's my next poems..... Bulbasaur Bulbasaur is so green His eyes are so very keen. The pretty seed on his back Looks very much like a backpack. The cute look on his face Is full of love and grace. But in battle he is strong Nearly as strong as King Kong. Charmander Charmander is like fire A heart burning with desire. Strong, willing very cute Tough in power, Height-Minute. Determined, keen always ready to battle His power rages and loudy rattles. Cute at first then so strong To pick another pokemon would be wrong. Squirtle Squirtle is a turtle so tough His shell on his back is very rough. He has strong protection in his shell as he hides It is so sad when you see him cry. Keen, fun always there Ready to battle an Ursaring bear. Strong in spirit, strong at heart A partnership with this pokemon will be hard to part. Caterpie Caterpie is a bug Caterpie looks like grub. He is green and very rough But he doesn't look very tough. Very small, very minute Not really very cute. Scaring Misty is what he does Though he doesn't ever buzz. Weedle Weedle has a short horn His body looks very torn Poison sting is what he can do But he can never moo Wriggle, jiggle is what he's like But he can't ride a trike Weird and brown is he Nearly similar to Caterpie |
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| Author: | TheKyogreKing [ Tue Apr 03, 2007 1:54 am ] |
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I like the way you wrote it! The rhyming works, but the use of words in the rhyme is kinda babyish, there's definately room for improvement. But hey! No one's perfect, and it's better rhyming than I could do! (I consider myself good at stories, poems, etc., but I never got the hang of rhyming!) I'd give it a 7.5-8.5 out of ten on the world famous KyogreKing scale! |
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| Author: | elusivedragonite [ Tue Apr 03, 2007 2:04 am ] |
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Yeah, I do agree with you on that point KyogreKing but babyish words rhyme so much easier than a long, scientific word such as deoxyribonucleic acid (DNA). Off topic but the pokemon Deoxys comes from the word DNA. |
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| Author: | TheKyogreKing [ Tue Apr 03, 2007 2:24 am ] |
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elusivedragonite wrote: Yeah, I do agree with you on that point KyogreKing but babyish words rhyme so much easier than a long, scientific word such as deoxyribonucleic acid (DNA). Yah! Someone finally agreed with my ratings! Still, it is better tham my rhyming (I have verbal proof from my teacher that I should leave rhyming alone...). Please write more! elusivedrogonite wrote: Off topic but the pokemon Deoxys comes from the word DNA. Hey, it does to! |
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| Author: | elusivedragonite [ Tue Apr 03, 2007 2:49 pm ] |
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Here's the next set..... LUCARIO Lucario is blue A pokemon very new. The Aura Guardian so strong Able to defeat King Kong. Obedient and respectful Not very forgetful. He's tough as stone Able to break a phone. A glow of faith, courage, hope and love A resemblence inside of what represents the dove. Kyogre Kyogre is the ruler of the sea The King of any possibility. He may attack or flee He may defend or leave. Kyogre had a battle With his fins he seems to paddle. To whip up a whirlpool To keep his cool That's the story of Kyogre Maybe he should have a fight with Koga? (I had some trouble with these poems and I don't think that they are very good compared to my other ones) |
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| Author: | TheKyogreKing [ Tue Apr 03, 2007 10:26 pm ] |
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Couldn't resist saying something again! Yes, the words are again kinda babyish, as if you had a writers block, but in general they're still good! Lucario... My second fave pokemon! Do my favourite one next! Jolteon! P.S. I hate Kyogre. He is not my fave. Surpised? Hehehehe... |
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| Author: | elusivedragonite [ Tue Apr 03, 2007 11:54 pm ] |
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To bring the request of TheKyogreKing I have made poems of Jolteon and two other LG/FR eeveeloutions. If you want a poem about a certain pokemon just post the pokemon and I'll make a poem about it. JOLTEON Jolteon is the shining thunder His speed will make him plunder. Quick on his feet and furry paws Static on his powerful jaws. One of the eeveeloutions, a hero Mighty as ancient King Nero A crackle and blast Thunder he casts Cute in his face and deceiving eyes His electric energy will make you fry. FLAREON Flareon is an inferno blaze His flames will create smoke and haze. Fiery at both heart and attacking His smoke and haze will become blacking. Beware of this eeveeloution of fire and flash As Flareon will instantly start to lash. Determined to win and never to lose Out of the eeveeloutions what one will you choose? VAPOREON Vapereon is majestic as ice The cuteness of he will make you enticed. Always swaying his enchanting tail To make you believe he will never fail. Body of water, quenched with H20 His strength might show a strong K-O Looks like a mermaid swimming in the sea Swimming beautiful, majestically. (I believe that these are much better compared to yesterday's ones) |
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| Author: | TheKyogreKing [ Wed Apr 04, 2007 12:17 am ] |
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Me again! Boy, you must be getting bord of me now! What point are the Eeveelutions without the actual Eevee! Do Eevee next! And Latias! The rhyming was much better that time! |
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| Author: | elusivedragonite [ Wed Apr 04, 2007 12:41 am ] |
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EEVEE Eevee stands for peculiar and unique His furry body and his courageous face makes him chic. Glamourous but plain with a rusty brown Though this unusual colour he never frowns. Sweet and mild-tempered is his personality The colour of his fur looks like a weird resemblence of neutrality. Though so different from his brothers He can turn out to be lots of different colours. LATIAS Latias is a mystical dragon You may see a resemblence with him and Eragon. If you can't see it look deep inside For the qualities in the heart are there with pride. You also might see another resemblence too Red and brown look the same, do you think too? Last but not least he is good at heart Another resemblence with Eragon, do they share a part? LATIOS The brother of Latias, is he the same? Just a different colour, just a differnet name. But is he more powerful in every way? You can find out if you buy Pokemon Emerald right now today. And is he more larger and bigger in size? Yes, that's a fact and he rarely cries. Do they have a difference in level and form? Maybe, you look, it may come to you like a storm. |
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| Author: | DNA [ Wed Apr 04, 2007 9:58 am ] |
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Oh yes. Nice rhyming there then. I'm kinda lousy with rhyming too so this is better than the best I could do, although Latias is not a "he". Latias is a "she". TheKyogreKing hates Kyogre? Surprising...Why would anyone hate Kyogre? 5/5, elusivedragonite! 
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| Author: | TheKyogreKing [ Wed Apr 04, 2007 10:30 pm ] |
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More! More! Do Blaziken next! And if you can, do Buizel (#418). But cause hes a 4th gen., he might be harder... Edit: Goody! P.S. I'm only called TheKyogreKing cause I couldn't think of a better name at the time, and 4th gens weren't out yet... And Kyogre is a blubbery whale with a feathery tail, and a mouth that when open, makes him look like a blubbero-shark! |
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| Author: | elusivedragonite [ Wed Apr 04, 2007 10:49 pm ] |
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Here's my next set... BLAZIKEN Blaziken will set you a blaze He will force you into a fiery maze. He will flare and flame up for a fearsome fight To his advantage he likes the sunlight. When facing a tougher opponent he flares even more Having the energy and power of the Earth's core. Inferno blasts will he make If weaker opponents try to fight, they maybe are making a mistake. BUIZEL Buizel is an aquatic sea weasel His species sounds a lot like measles. His weakness are sparks You might see him in a lake at the park. Very swift when raining Is he swift when training? Is he the same, or does he glow in the night? Also, is his brain very bright? (Again, yes the Buizel one was hard as I didn't really have lots of info about it but it was ok). ROSERADE Roserade is a blooming flower In battle she has a lot of power. Grasswhistle to make you fall into a deep sleep You won't get this pokemon very cheap. Solarbeam, the beam really is damaging As she goes on rampaging. Her sweet and suculent scent of roses entice you even more What is the source of her power, is it in her core? ROSELIA Roselia is a suculent, seducing plant Her sweet, sweet grace will enchant. She will entice you with her seducing smell The sound of the most magical bells. Though fire does damage her great Her heart of sympathy is a trait. To always have courage but always stay shy Quiet, serene, just twirling by. BUDEW Budew is a minute but cute flower bud Not very dirty, doesn't like mud. Natural cure is it's ability In harmony with tranqulity. Though not immune to anything It looks like a bell that goes dong and ding. A peaceful state it is always in Never ever think to throw it in the bin! |
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| Author: | tigerd [ Sun Apr 22, 2007 5:27 am ] |
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AWESOME, dragonite 5/5 May I reccomend Umbreon, Espeon and Furret? Ps: do you remember me from your shop? |
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| Author: | hfxjus [ Sun Apr 22, 2007 6:47 am ] |
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It's great, elusivedragonite! 5/5 . I like the roselia poem. If you can, do a Muk poem for me. |
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| Author: | lugiatrainer01 [ Tue Apr 24, 2007 4:35 am ] |
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You're probably the best Pokemon poet ever, ElusiveDragonite ! How about a poem about Lapras ? Please, please ? |
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| Author: | elusivedragonite [ Fri Apr 27, 2007 3:44 pm ] |
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Ok. Here it is. UMBREON Umbreon is a mysterious creature, lurking through the dark He is very peculiar, his bite is better than his bark. His rings on his body shines in the moonlight His serene, but weird sense will give you a fright. Don't ever miss a chance to see this misty pokemon that is strong As Umbreon is a rarity, a beauty, so to choose another pokemon would be wrong. But be careful if you dare, to train and tame this pokemon of fright. He might entice you to become a trainer in the night. ESPEON Espeon is strong in sprit and in power Rememeber that in battle he will devour. His love and friendship with his trainer will prove to be a challenging battle Espeon's way of grace, love but strength will always flatter His protection is only worthy of trainers that are so high Only the trainers that have power to rise to the sky. So when you see an Espeon train it will love and care Because if you don't, it might vanish like a flare. FURRET Furret is a furry creature that was made for love and care Though you might think he is puny and weak he has the power to tear His brown and white colours may make you think he is just ordinary But in a fearsome battle he will prove to you extraordinary. Never ever fail to train and capture this grace For it might prove to you to be like a powerful mace. So never ever think that is pokemon can't handle the pressure. Because between other pokemon, Furret wins the measure. MUK His name gives it all to tell Doesn't Muk ring a bell? His purple blobs will make people sick That's why Team Rocket loves this pokemon to the tick His awful scent fills the room and in time the house or hotel That's why people want to get out of the room and get clean oygen to smell. But even though he is a disadvantage in life In battle he will cause the opponent strife. LAPRAS Lapras is a heavenly gift It's magnificent and so graceful in water that also can lift. It's enchanting, magical eyes entices you to come on board Seducing and lovable as it is people are pulling the cord. They make it suffer and drive it nearly to the point of extinction Why would anyone want this majestic pokemon in depletion? Why, now I will remember to never forget this gift of serenity. We should always try to live with this pokemon in harmony. Lapras was the hardest I would have to say. Keep on requesting please! It's fun!:)
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| Author: | tigerd [ Wed May 09, 2007 3:59 pm ] |
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Do Dusclops and Ariados. |
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| Author: | TheKyogreKing [ Sat May 12, 2007 4:35 am ] |
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Remember me? Better! Better! More! More! When you have the time, can you please do Shaymin or Glaceon (not both, grass and ice don't like each other!), and Luxio, who I have a sudden attraction to. |
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| Author: | Treeckomaster [ Sat Jun 02, 2007 2:17 pm ] |
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Everything theKyogreKing said! Do Treecko! 10101010101011 |
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