Hi! I thought I’d try writing a fanfic that’s NOT in journal form. Everything I’ve written so far has been in journal format, so this is a first. I’ll try to make updates on a regular basis, but just pm me if it’s been a while just to jog my memory. And if you’re going to write about something huge that I forgot about, please PM me for that too.

Prologue: the starter

In Kanto, there is a town called Pewter. In Pewter, there is a street called Green. On Green Street, there is a small blue one-story house. In that small blue one story house, there lives Chris, a future legend. He just doesn’t know it yet. In fact, he doesn’t know very much, because In ten seconds, he will be ten years old, exactly. It will also be nine A.M. on Tuesday May 31.
He decided to sleep in today, because his alarm clock has been blaring for one hour already. He doesn’t know that either. He finally woke up ten seconds after he turned ten. He woke up, and found a piece of paper taped to his head, where he always puts one when he wants to remember something. Heaven knows why. he picked the paper off of his forehead, and read the front. Lucky him, he just remembered that it was his tenth birthday, and he was thirty minutes late to get his first pokémon. He didn’t know whether to scream or cheer, so he did something in between.
Somehow, he managed to eat breakfast, get dressed, brush his teeth, comb his hair, take a shower, and get out the door within ten MORE seconds. Within another ten seconds, he was on his way. he watched at least twelve people go into the pewter gym, and he said to himself “meh” for no apparent reason.
After squishing at least twelve Caterpie, he was in Pallet Town. Now, this was thirty or so years after the time that the games and anime of Pokémon, so of course there were huge changes. For one, Daisy is now Professor Daisy Oak, and the original Prof. Oak is in a better place. Switzerland, I think. Also, May won the Miss Hoenn contest. Don’t ask. Getting back to the story. Chris finally made it to the lab.
THUMP! Chris collided with the door. the door was knocked in, with him stuck to it. He fell onto the floor, with another loud THUMP! Then, as if to add to the embarrassment, Daisy was standing there with all of her assistants.
“Erm, hi! I’m Chris ‘OKenson. I’ve come for my First pokémon!” He exclaimed, as if nothing happened.
“Sure! Right this way.” Replied Daisy. At least that’s what her voice said; her face said “oh great. Another genius.”
Chris was then lead to the largest computer he ever saw. It had a keyboard with just three buttons on it. They were labeled:

PREVIOUS

ACCEPT

NEXT

After he was finished being dumbfounded, he pressed the third button, and was being faced with a picture of something that looked like a yellow human child with the words ABRA and PSYCHIC next to it. He pressed it again, and saw a picture of a smiling monkey with a hand on it’s tail with AIPOM and NORMAL next to it. Next he pressed the first button, and the yellow child appeared again. he pressed the third button, and saw the monkey again. He pressed the third button again and saw a small shrimp with fins and the words ANORITH, ROCK and BUG next to it. After he did this around 107 more times, he came to a pokémon with what looked like a green hat and white skirt on with the words RALTS and PSYCHIC next to it. He pressed the second button.

End of chapter 1

Nice story. Me wanties to read more!

That's pretty good actually. I'd give it 7/10, not too original, but pretty well written. Try describing a bit more, and is this like Wally?