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| Author: | DarkPhantom02 [ Sat Apr 21, 2007 6:41 am ] |
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| Author: | The Obsidian Wolf [ Sat Apr 21, 2007 9:46 am ] |
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Hm, I like this a lot! It has a nice feel to it, and I am intrigued to know of Tural's origins, and why he has alligned himself with the Ironian fleet. 9.9/10 Nothing's perfect. 
Also nice not to see spelling/grammar mistakes that are ever present in my fic. 
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| Author: | DarkPhantom02 [ Sat Apr 21, 2007 11:06 am ] |
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| Author: | The Obsidian Wolf [ Sat Apr 21, 2007 1:08 pm ] |
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Ooh, class. I like the way it sets the mode for the rest of the book, somewhat Lord of the Ringsish (the film, the book never really did that, it just droned somewhat.) I'd like to see the two wizards have a full scale fight some time in the future, or something similar. I know they're dead, but I would imagine that their power must somehow be passed into the blades, or at least into others. I look forward to reading the next part a lot! |
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| Author: | DarkPhantom02 [ Sat Apr 21, 2007 2:15 pm ] |
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| Author: | Ghost Writer [ Fri May 25, 2007 4:36 pm ] |
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WOW, I really like this one. I hope you get it published, it deserves to be. You'll be a great author one day, unless you alread are 
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