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 <<<<The Adventures of Chimchar>>>> 
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CHAPTER ONE~~ The Introduction of the Monkey!
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One day there was a little monkey born a ltitle different from the other monkeys in the group. This monkey was on fire!! “Oooh Oooh Ahhh Ahhh!” said the other monkeys as they backed away from this flaming monkey. The normal monkeys did not accept this monkey so he was left to fend of the world. People called him Chimchar.

As Chimchar roamed the world of Humans, When suddenly a gardevoir appeared infornt of Chimchar. “ Chimchar! You are no ordinary ermmm.. Monkey. You are one of the elite monkeys! A pokemon!” Said gardevoir. Gardevoir then uses her mystical powers and opens a portal between the human world and the pokemon world. Chimchar lands on its butt and then when a human walks by chimchar grabs a hold of the humans leg and the human looks down… “Agg! A monkey.. No a pokemon! Looks like a chimchar.. A chimchar!! This is extra rare in jhoto” said the clumsy Prof. Elm.

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Keep active and keep reading… <<<<The>>>>

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Wed Mar 14, 2007 9:26 am
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ur just telling what happened describe what what happens show us how chimchar felt dont just tell us

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It is cool :D . When I first read it I was like :shock: because I read another fan fiction like it. 8.5/10

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8/10 Cool :)


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8/10 Cool :)


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Good Story Idea. But dont rush it. 4.5/10 because of shortness. Sorry for the low rating but rushing it like that really ruins it for me. Sorry.

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