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Pokemon Ranger   Joined: Mon Jul 17, 2006 12:43 pm Posts: 522 
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_________________ <center>  Join PokeJourney, an RPG site, today!  </center>Last edited by DarkPhantom02 on Fri Sep 07, 2007 2:49 pm, edited 1 time in total. |
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Pokemon Master   Joined: Wed Sep 27, 2006 12:03 am Posts: 1559 Location: Dragon's Den
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Hm, I like this a lot! It has a nice feel to it, and I am intrigued to know of Tural's origins, and why he has alligned himself with the Ironian fleet.
9.9/10 Nothing's perfect. 
Also nice not to see spelling/grammar mistakes that are ever present in my fic.  _________________  "Play with fire and expect to be burned." |
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Pokemon Ranger Joined: Mon Jul 17, 2006 12:43 pm Posts: 522
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_________________ <center> Join PokeJourney, an RPG site, today! </center>Last edited by DarkPhantom02 on Fri Sep 07, 2007 2:50 pm, edited 1 time in total. |
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Pokemon Master Joined: Wed Sep 27, 2006 12:03 am Posts: 1559 Location: Dragon's Den
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Ooh, class. I like the way it sets the mode for the rest of the book, somewhat Lord of the Ringsish (the film, the book never really did that, it just droned somewhat.)
I'd like to see the two wizards have a full scale fight some time in the future, or something similar. I know they're dead, but I would imagine that their power must somehow be passed into the blades, or at least into others. I look forward to reading the next part a lot! _________________ "Play with fire and expect to be burned." |
| Sat Apr 21, 2007 1:08 pm |
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Pokemon Ranger Joined: Mon Jul 17, 2006 12:43 pm Posts: 522
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_________________ <center> Join PokeJourney, an RPG site, today! </center>Last edited by DarkPhantom02 on Fri Sep 07, 2007 2:51 pm, edited 1 time in total. |
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Pokemon Ranger Joined: Mon Jul 17, 2006 12:43 pm Posts: 522
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_________________ <center> Join PokeJourney, an RPG site, today! </center>Last edited by DarkPhantom02 on Fri Sep 07, 2007 2:51 pm, edited 1 time in total. |
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Pokemon Ranger Joined: Mon Jul 17, 2006 12:43 pm Posts: 522
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- _________________ <center> Join PokeJourney, an RPG site, today! </center>Last edited by DarkPhantom02 on Fri Sep 07, 2007 2:51 pm, edited 1 time in total. |
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Ace Trainer   Joined: Wed Mar 14, 2007 6:45 pm Posts: 382 Location: Searching for the place all the Abra teleport to. I'm going to crash their party.
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WOW, I really like this one. I hope you get it published, it deserves to be. You'll be a great author one day, unless you alread are
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