If you have read the story the ultimate evil then you should know this is a sequeal of that story 20 years later.

The setting is 20 years after Proffesor Oak(the ultimate evil since i'm not going to finish it oak was the ultimate evil) was defeated by Ash ketchum a boy from pallet town. 20 year later a boy from Twin leaf town sets out to start his journey.

Chapter 1 A new beggining

"Andy get up hurry it's time for proffesor Rowan to give us our new pokemon." said a girl that was trying to wake up Andy

Half asleep Andy responded "what is it?"

"Andy don't you remember today is the day that proffesor Rowan will give you and me a starter so that we can start our journeys." said the girl.

"Yippe it's finally time." jumped Andy excited as he was about to recieve his very first pokemon. While Andy was getting ready the girl who seemed to be about the same age as Andy's was talking to a lady that seemed to be in her mid 30s.

"Jazmine you are very mature and please travel with Andy so that you can keep him out of trouble." said the lady.

"Don't worry i'll keep him out of trouble." responded Jazmine in an eager way.

Andy came running out of his room with his clothes and supplies ready. "Come on let's go before the pokemon are gone." said Andy in a hurry.

"Now wait up young man you can't just go that fast you haven't eaten breakfast." said the lady.

"Yeah mom but Jazmine said that she was going to buy some breakfast on the way to proffesor Rowan's Lab right Jazmine." said Andy as he winked to her.

"Yeah we're going to eat breakfast at The catered cafeteria the finest resturant in town." said Jazmine.

"Ok your very responsible Jazmine so i trust that you'll keep him out of trouble." said Andy's mom and then she turned to Andy and said "You be careful i want you to be a good pokemon trainer but don't ever get into trouble with the police or talk to strangers or..."

Andy inturreptued and said "Mom i know can i go now."

"Well the way you talk to your mother like that you need to go to your room instead of a pokemon." said Andy's mom.

"I'm sorry mom it's just that i want to be a great trainer like dad and become a great trainer like him." said Andy

"Thanks for reminding me your father said that he was coming tommorow to pay a visit and give you tips about how to raise your pokemon and all that stuff."

"Dad's coming yay." said Andy happily.

"Ok Andy let's go." said Jazmine and said "Bye Mrs. Zamora."

"Bye mom." Added Andy.

"Bye you two have fun." said Andy's mom.

"Boy your mother is over protective." said Jazmine.

"Tell me about it." respoded Andy.

"Race you to proffesor Rowan's lab." said Andy

"Where do you think that your going I told your mom we would eat at the Catered Cafeteria." said Jazmine holding his arm so he wouldn't continue running.

"Let me go." struggled Andy

Then Jazmine saw Andy's blue eyes and let him go and was blushing while she said "I guess we could get our pokemon first."

After 10 minutes of walking they finally made it to the proffesor's lab.

"Hello Jazmine and Andy i've been expecting you." said Proffesor Rowan. He added "there are 3 pokemon over there in that table." One is for you Andy and one is for Jazmine. "The one in the middle is a Chimchar which is a fire type monkey the one to the left st Turtwig a Grass type turtle and the one in the right is Piplup a water penguin." These 3 pokemon are valuable but you can only have one.

"Ladies first." said jazmine as she walked up to the table.

"What that's not fair." said Andy.

"Andy don't get mad you'll get your turn." said proffesor Rowan.

"But what if she gets Chimchar that's the one i like." said Andy

"I'll take this Piplup it's so cute." said Jazmine carrying the pokeball.

"Yay it's my turn i choose Chimchar." said Andy running to the table.

"Okay now that you 2 have your pokemon these is for both of you." One is a pokedex which gives you data on all pokemon and the 5 balls are called pokeballs which let you catch pokemon so you can add to your team." said the proffesor handing the items to Andy and Jazmine.

There was music coming from outside and there was a limosine parked outside of the lab. Then a kid in a suit with braids and sunglasses came out of the limosine.

"Are you Montel?" asked proffesor Rowan

"I'm Montel Vontavious Porter but you can call me MVP." said the kid and added "Where's the chimchar i've been looking forward to."

"Um your kind of late Andy already got chimchar the only pokemon left is turtwig." said the proffesor.

"You took my Chimchar don't you know who i am." I'm Montel Vontavious Porter i come from one of the richest families in sinnou and now i'm stuck with some turtle."

"Hey i don't care who you are every pokemon deserves respect." said the proffesor.

"Fine I'll take the Turtwig." said MVP.


"Here are your pokedex and pokeballs." said the proffesor giving these items to MVP.

"Thank you and Andy you haven't seen the last of MVP." MVP said as he was getting into his limo.

"Who was that guy." asked Andy.

"I don't know but he was kind of cute." said Jazmine.

"Your kidding right?" asked Andy

"Oh and Andy i heard that your father is coming congradulations." said the proffesor It's not everyday that a pro comes to our town.

"Jazmine I'll race you home." said Andy.

"That reminds me we still have to go eat breakfast." said Jazmine.

"That's if you can catch me." said Andy

"Come back here."

To Be Continued...


I hoped you liked my story. I won't be writing alot of chapters until i know what sinnou looks like the pokemon and the names of the towns and people. Again I hoped you enjoyed it and I hope that you'll keep reading my fan fic.

Yeah the title stinks. What should I change the title to. If anyone wanted to know the ending of the ultimate evil then here's the summary of the ending and the background of the story.

500 years ago Proffesor Oak tried to capture Mew but mew destroyed his body using it's psychic powers leaving oak only his brain. His hatred grew so the brain grew bigger and bigger. He then went to hide i a place called pallet town which was originally his hometown. He then went to hiding under a house which was his base. He then created clones of himself and the clone became the most famous proffesor ever. Mean while the brains true objective in giving these kids pokemon was so that one day one of them would capture Mew. Oak got tired of waiting so he sent one of his clones to the viridian gym. The gym leader was the strongest gym leader in all of kanto so the clone took him to the brain and the brain took control of him. Ten years later where we left off Ash battles Erik(the guy with the scizor) and barely defeats him. Giovanni enters but he is only a puppet for the brain and explains to Erik that his parents were just pwns to him so that he could obtain information about Mew and he disposed of them soon after. Then giovanni fainted and on a giant screen there was Proffesor Oak explaining his plan and giving them the location of his base(pallet town under the lab). When they entered pallet town nobody was there. They soon reached the bottom of the lab and saw a giant brain(the size of a wailord) inside a tank of water. Erik angry about the brain killing his parents sent out his scizor and used hyperbeam on the brain.(we all know how strong the hyper beam from scizor is) As the smoke cleared the brain was there laughing and he was injury free. Then Roger appeared and used what looked like a psychic attack to lift the brain. Roger said this nightmare ends right here right now. The brain laughed and used it's own psychic and knocked down Roger. The brain said how fitting for you to come to me now i can absorb you. Roger lauched a shadow ball that looked like it destroyed the brain. Then Erik still mad was there kicking the brain and then the brain's tail thingy was about to absorb Erik. He said Mew let me absorb you or this pathetic loser will be my next victim. Roger(who we now know is Mew) agreed and the brain absorbed him. The brain popped and a creature that looked like mew2 only red and had some venins and was a thousand times stronger took the place of the brain. It laughed and said it was Mew3 and declared itself the king of the world. Ash commanded pikachu to use volt tackle but the creature didn't feel any pain. The creature used psychic and it was so powerful that it was stopping pikachu from breathing. Then a shadow ball came from nowhere aimed at mew3. The shot came from Mew2 and Mew3 declared Mew2 to be an incomplete accident. Mew2 told ash that if they can get Mew out of Mew3's body then Mew3 would be destroyed. How do we do that asked ash. Mew2 said by cutting it in half Mew should be able to escape i'll distract it while you find a way to cut it in half. Ash was thinking while Mew3 easily outpowered all of mew2's moves. Mew3 knocked out mew2 with a shadow ball. Then it used it's psychic on ash. Now i'm going to finish you for good. Use slash said a voice from nowhere. Then a persian used slash and Mew3 was hurt. Then Erik commanded his scizor to use ariel ace on the creatures weakened spot. Then pikachu used iron tail and mew3 split in half. Mew awoke from the stomach and escaped before it could heal. It said you haven't seen the last of me. Then the slime started to grow into a monster. Mew used his powers to create an orb(called the purity orb) and he used it to seal away oak. Mew gave it to ash so that ash would gaurd it 4ever and The terror of oak would be trapped inside 4ever. Then Mew and Mewtwo dissappeared and Ash thought what will i do now. Gary suggested he should go to sinnou.

My goodness, this is long. And excellent.

Excellent development - I wish I ould do this

And, this is very long. Again, good development, as always

10/10

thank you for all the comments and here is chapter 2 of the story of andy(which still need a better name)

Summary of chapter one: Andy and Jazmine go to proffesor Rowan's lab and get their starter pokemon. Jazmine picked a piplup and Andy picked a Chimchar. After that a mysterious trainer known as MVP chose Turtwig as his starter but wanted a chimchar which andy got. This has made MVP show hatred towards Andy.


Chapter 2 The Sinnoh Colusuem

"Andy get back here we need to go eat." demanded Jazmine running trying to catch Andy. "I know i have an idea go Piplup." said jazmine as she threw a pokeball and a penguin-like pokemon came out of the ball. "Use bubblebeam." commanded jazmine pointing at Andy.

"That's not fair your using a pokemon." said Andy trying to avoid the bubble beam but it hit him and Jazmine grabbed him.

"Now I told your mom we where going to go eat and i have always kept a promise." said jazmine.

They reached the restaurant and when they were going to order Jazmine recognized the face of the cashier.

"Well if it isn't my little sis and her boyfriend." said the cashier.

"So you got the job Stephanie?" replied Jazmine in an annoyed manner.

"Can we eat now?" said Andy.

"Well he's not someone i'd pick for a boyfriend but your no price yourself." said Stephanie laughing at Jazmine.

"Just get us a table before i call the manager." replied jazmine.

"No don't do that i can't get fired on my first day." said Stephanie. "One table for two coming up i'll send a waitor to get your requests." said Stephanie. Andy and Jazmine went and sat down.

"So what are your goals Andy?" Jazmine asked.

"Simple i'm going to catch all the pokemon and become a pokemon Pro like my dad." replied Andy. "Chimchar will be the first of many pokemon that i'll have."

"You'll never be a pro with that attitude. Your just one of those guys that depend on luck and think everything will work out." said jazmine.

"I could beat you in a pokemon battle with both my arms tied behind my back." Said Andy.

"Of course you could because you don't use your hands when you battle." Replied Jazmine. "How about we watch TV suggested jazmine." They turned on the TV and the news were on. There was a tall man that looked exactly like Montel Vontavious Porter which they ran into earlier. There was a man interviewing him.

"I'm here with Micheal Vontavious Porter the developer of the sinnoh colusuem and problably the richest man in sinnoh."

"Thank you but the credit shouldn't go to me but to all of the workers that built the sinnoh colusuem and my son Montel Vontavious Porter who just recieved his first pokemon today." said the tall man.

"Humble words from a humble man now for my first question." "What was the purpose of the Sinnoh colusuem?" asked the newsman.

"The purpose of it is to attract battlers from all over the world." "I hope for only those who love to battle to come to the sinnou colusuem." said MVP Sr. "There will be rules though. For you to enter you will need to have to have fullfilled one of these requirements." "Number one is you must have won a total of 12 badges." "Number 2 you need to have competed in the pokemon league tournament or won the tournament." "The third and final thing you must do is become a gym leader or Elite 4 member." "These rules will allow only trainers who have top battling abillity to compete that is all and the sinnoh colusuem opens next week." MVP sr left and went to his limosine. Then his cell phone started to ring and he answered.

"Is everything going according to plan Michael?" Asked the person who called MVP sr.

"Yes sir soon the strongest trainers will come to the colusuem and we will find the chosen one." Replied MVP Sr.

"Good I need the chosen one so that i can set free the great beast and unleash a world of chaos." Said the guy.

"After i find the way to set it free you'll leave me alone right?" Asked MVP Sr.

"Of course but you must keep your end of the bargain." The stranger hung up.

"Wow the sinnoh colusuem that sounds awesome." said Andy and then he left running. Andy ran into a waitress and she almost fell.

"Andy come back." Said Jazmine and she also went running and crashed into the waitress and they both fell.

"That does it i Quit." said the maidservant. Jazzmine continued chasing after Andy. She caught up to him.

"Where do you think your going?" she asked.

"To the sinnoh colusuem." replied Andy.

"You don't even have any badges and we don't even know the location of it." Said Jazmine.

"How about we have a battle and i show you that i know what i'm doing." replied andy.

"Fine let's have battle." said jazmine. "I'll show you that your nothing but a spoiled brat." Just then a helicopter with a symbol that looked like the letter E ovelapping the letter Z was coming landing. A tall man and a Scizor got out of the helicopter.

"Hello son how are you doing?" Asked the man.

To Be Continued.....

nice story, i give it a 9/10...and your right, this does need a better name...lol

This is the last chapter i write for a month since i won't post anything or go to the chats for a month.

Summary of previous chapter: MVP Sr announces the sinnoh coluseum which is a new place to battle and that you need to have a total of 8 badges. Andy left the restaraunt in an attempt to go to the sinnoh colusuem. Then a stranger called MVP sr and informed him to find the chosen one so that the great beast could be unlocked. Then a helicopter came and stopped Andy from running.

Chapter 3 An encounter of Legendary Preportions


"Daddy i haven't seen you in a year." said andy hugging the man that came out of the helicopter.

"Hello Andy. Your mother told me that you were going to get a starter pokemon from proffesor Rowan."

"yeah come on out chimchar." said andy throwing a pokeball up in the air. "OMG that felt so cool doing that." andy continued as a small monkey-like pokemon came out of the pokeball.

"Chim... Chimchar." said the monkey going to andy and hugging him.

"So you've chosen a chimchar as your starter." That is a very good pokemon. Said Andy's dad. "Hello jazmine did you also get a starter pokemon." asked Andy's dad looking at jazmine.

"Yes i got a Piplup." said jazmine.

"Marvelous so what are you guys going to do on your journeys." asked andy's dad.

"I don't ...." then jazmine was interupted by andy.

"I'm going to particicpate in the Sinnoh coluseum." said andy and added. "Michael Vontavious Porter announced it."

"Well your going to need to go to orrebugh city to get your first gym battle." said andy's dad. "I was looking at the news and it said that you need a total of 8 badges."

"Which way is orrebugh city?" asked andy.

"It's north east of Jubilife city." replied andy's dad.

"Let's go chimchar were going to go win our first badge." said Andy and chimchar running towards the woods.

"That Andy he must take after me." said andy's dad. "jazmine why don't you and Andy start your journeys right now and i'll tell your parents that you guys already left." Added Andy's dad.

"But i don't know what i want to be yet." replied jazmine.

"Just keep my son out of trouble and along the way you'll find out what you want to be." said Andy's dad.

"ok" She said as she started running trying to catch Andy.

"I'll be the greatest trainer and i can beat who ever's the gym leader.'' Andy thought to himself as he continued running. Suddenly a creature stopped andy. The creature was pink and blue with some yellow. It's face was shaped like a crecent and it's body looked like a duck's. It had two crecent shaped things on it's back and two arms. "what is that?" Said Andy to himself as he took out his pokedex.

"Cressilia the lunar pokemon. It is said to be the spirit of the cressent moon and is said to travel at the speed of sound. It is said to be searching for something." Said the pokedex. Cressilia left and where it was there was a flute.

"What's this?" asked Andy as he picked it up. Andy started to play it and something started to form in the sky. It seemed like it was a portal to another dimension.

"Andy what's going?" asked jazmine as she saw the portal opening. She took the flute from him and the portal started to close. There was a man with binoculars he had a robe with three letters on it. MOH. He then jumped out of the tree and there was a small camp site.

"Sir i have located the flute of azure." said the guy spying on andy.

"So does that means that the Chosen one has been found?" asked a tall guys with a robe that seemed to be the one in charge.

"I don't know sir but i took a picture of a kid playing the azure flute and a dimension was starting to open." Then the one that was spying showed the one that seemed to be in charge a picture of andy playing the azure flute.

"So the great chosen one is a small boy. Bring him to me." Said the guy in charge.

"Right away sir." responded the grunt.

"Not so fast let's keep an eye on him for a while." said the commander.

"Where did you get that flute?" asked jazmine.

"A pokemon named Cressilia dropped it." replied andy.

"You mean the legendary?" asked Jazmine.

"I think so that's what the pokedex said." Replied andy After about an hour they finally made it to Jubilife city but there was nobody there.

"Hello is anyone here?" asked Jazmine.

"I'm here." then the guy who spying on them came down from a building. "Come with us little boy or this city will just be a memory."


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