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Myuutsuu
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I'm not much of a story teller but I'll give it a try. These are the tales of the Pok
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rubypoke
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Myuutsuu wrote: I'm not much of a story teller but I'll give it a try. These are the tales of the Pok
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Myuutsuu
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rubypoke wrote: Very Interesting, but it put me off when it said 'army' and 'marched' use different words that animals would use? Actually, I used them 'cos I wan't them to sound more human. Thanks for the feedback. By the way, "The Fall Of Magikarp" is about how it was once a powerful Pok _________________
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rubypoke
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Myuutsuu wrote: rubypoke wrote: Very Interesting, but it put me off when it said 'army' and 'marched' use different words that animals would use? Actually, I used them 'cos I wan't them to sound more human. Thanks for the feedback. By the way, "The Fall Of Magikarp" is about how it was once a powerful Pok
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Myuutsuu
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I just finished the last bit, here you go:
The Fall Of Magikarp (The Tale of Lapras, Magikarp & Missingno)
The guardian of Cinnabar, Lapras needed help controlling the powerful Missingno. It had already caused 3 eruptions and was threatening the local wild Tentacool. Lapras called upon seas to create a Pok
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rubypoke
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Myuutsuu wrote: I just finished the last bit, here you go:
The Fall Of Magikarp (The Tale of Lapras, Magikarp & Missingno)
The guardian of Cinnabar, Lapras needed help controlling the powerful Missingno. It had already caused 3 eruptions and was threatening the local wild Tentacool. Lapras called upon seas to create a Pok
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Myuutsuu
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It says in the Pok
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rubypoke
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Myuutsuu wrote: It says in the Pok
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Myuutsuu
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Flight Of Pidgeot (The Tale Of Pidgeot)
Sunrise in Kanto is always a magnificent sight and for Pidgeot, sunrise is always an adventure. Sunrise marks the beginning of a new fantastic flight that Pidgeot will take.
Pidgeot woke from its slumber. It stood up in its nest on the top of the highest tree in Viridian Forest and let out a loud cry. Then, it spread its wings and took off. It soared high into the sky, above the clouds making its nest a tiny dot. Then, it spotted a Caterpie. It dived down at an extreme speed, landed on a tree and took the Caterpie in its beak. The Pidgeot quickly ate the Caterpie and then flew up again soon leaving behind the forest. It passed a large town of rocks and a tall mountain filled with Pok
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rubypoke
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 Nice!!!
Try to make one about  that could be about them all splitting up, sorry for some reason exeggcute is really sticking in my head. lol
Good going!
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Myuutsuu
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I was thinking about a story of how they came together. Oh and I dug out some old computer files and found an outline for the following tales:
Kyogre Genesis
Groudon Genesis
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Myuutsuu
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This tale is designed to confuse. It is the tale of Mew although he is never really involved. Also, I said I'd not use speech but I've really broken that rule and the mystery Pok
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rubypoke
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That wasn't confusing, well confusing isnt the way i'd put it...
A mentally confused mew/mewtwo is about right.
I understood that in a weird way! lol very good
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Myuutsuu
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Realise I haven't posted here in a while, but I've been doing other stuff.
The Birth Of Porygon (Porygon
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rubypoke
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That was pretty good about Porygon.
lol Psypoke is where Porygon is... *Starts looking around*
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Lintaro
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Good one but can you try to make the stories more interesting?
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Goldenprince
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Ur really good at legends....
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SwellowLuvr
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I do like your tales, and just for future reference, people have different personalities so you might want to put a huge variaty of emotions in your story. Just a hint. That way it will appeal to a higher amount of audience.
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thepokemasta9_9_9
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u r very brilliant at making up these legends i might make a thread with mine please check it out and rate i!
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Latiosdude
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I liked all of the storys, especialy the one about magkarp. Keep up the good work!
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shadowman777
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I agree they were all good and the  one was my favorite. _________________
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