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JDesigns
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Fri May 19, 2006 1:03 am
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yay, its pachirisu, I made it from the picture, C&C appreciated.
I had fun making it, I try to use chessboard shading as much as I can to make it look like a Gamefreak sprite, it might look a bit flat, but the shading is just light, I'll maybe adjust the levels to give it more depth _________________ 
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Jodi
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Joined: Fri Sep 09, 2005 8:58 am
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Hmm... Nice tail. I like the tail. ^_^
The head looks a bit deformed, though, and it's arms also need a bit of work. Also (And this is not a nessecity) try some different outline colors, like grey and dark blue.
I actually made a Pachy sprite myself a little while ago. ^_^ He's such a cute little guy. 
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JDesigns
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Fri May 19, 2006 1:03 am
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Ty man, thats some true critique wich I already noticed myself, but about the hands, they are pretty though to make them different on such a small canvas so I went with those. your right about the outline, because black has such a great impact and sometimes takes away some smoothness, I'll maybe try to make diaruga sometimes ( wich seems like a really big challenge ) .
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rubypoke
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Joined: Mon Mar 28, 2005 5:12 am
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Location: England, with the greasy fry ups.
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Jodi wrote: Hmm... Nice tail. I like the tail. ^_^
The head looks a bit deformed, though, and it's arms also need a bit of work. Also (And this is not a nessecity) try some different outline colors, like grey and dark blue.
I actually made a Pachy sprite myself a little while ago. ^_^ He's such a cute little guy. Jodi your one was awsome. ^_^
This one's really good, I cant do this pokemon for some reason.
Too much checkerboarding on the Torso. Small torso's dont tend to have it unless they like being hated.  Its fine ish. The arms and legs needs to be worked on but hey, im bad at arms too.
I think there's too much checkerboarding on the tail or not enough actualy shading, as in block shading.
Overall it's good. Cute. Tail is the best bit along with the top bits blue colouring.
8/10
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dragonite
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Its very good, I can't draw, but I think you should improve the shading on the torso. Maybe make the head a bit wider. But its really good. Especially the tail.
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JDesigns
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Thanks guys, I know it needs lots of improvements, and I thank you all for the nice critique !
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Drayos
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Preety cool.
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DarkPhantom02
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I like it. Like everyone's said, the tail is the best. I would try to work on the head a bit. It looks a little . . . deformed. lol. good job though. lot better than i can do.
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