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Team Rocket's Revival
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Pokemon Master   Joined: Sat Apr 16, 2005 3:29 am Posts: 1399 Location: Toenails 
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Here's and attempt by me at a little Fanfic. So, here goes:
Chapter One: It Begins A lone man strolled into the city. He looked up for a second at the sign that hung limply from the arch he entered through. It read "Welcome to Saffron City!" He chuckled and continued his slow walk to the center of town. He was a pale man, in bleak contrast with his dark suit, but he did not look out of place in the drab city. On his belt were three pok _________________ <center>  Last edited by Undeadcutlet on Sun Sep 18, 2005 12:47 am, edited 4 times in total. |
| Sun Jun 19, 2005 6:16 am |
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Pokemon Master  Joined: Mon Apr 18, 2005 8:06 pm Posts: 1793 Location: Lavender Town
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Very interesting so far- I don't follow many long-running fanfictions, but I think I'll keep my eye on this. The foreshadowing of a Dark Secret™ was a little strong, making me worry this could become a Gary Stu, but so far it's quite well written and the setting is a nice break from the stuff I'm writing and similar stories
 I'll look forwards to chapter 2._________________ <center><img src="http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/2486/sidneyncassiusdollcroppedka4.png"><img src="images/trainercards/gryphflame.png"> http://www.bunnystick.com/ - Doll Base</center> |
| Sun Jun 19, 2005 8:10 am |
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Ace Trainer  Joined: Wed Mar 16, 2005 7:55 am Posts: 361 Location: flying with starfire
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ooohh,i like the bad guys
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| Sun Jun 19, 2005 8:28 pm |
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Dragon Tamer   Joined: Wed Jun 22, 2005 11:51 am Posts: 240 Location: At Team Inferno Base, training
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I liked it.Mainly because it sounds similar to the Pokemon series I'm working on.One of the main characters, Gaven-how can I put this(you can tell by that that I don't talk about my stories very often)was a former Rocket, but here's the twist.There was no other choice!Let me explain.His family is rich & he to control the fortune when he was older, but-do I need to go on at what happens?Luckily, he gets a chance & races off.Here's the second twist: the mother who decides to tkae him in is the main characters'(Brittancia, Angela & Lumines's)mom!Strange coincidence.
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| Mon Sep 12, 2005 8:20 pm |
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is very close to getting banned  Joined: Sat Jul 16, 2005 9:13 pm Posts: 2900 Location: Hiding under her bed.
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Nice stuff, Undeadcutlet! I like your writing style and the story has me hooked already. I'll be following it faithfully!
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| Tue Sep 13, 2005 2:30 am |
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Pokemon Master Joined: Sat Apr 16, 2005 3:29 am Posts: 1399 Location: Toenails
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Well there is one problem... I began writing this months ago and I don't know if I'll have the inspiration to continue it. I might make a one week poll to see who wants me to continue this story...
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| Tue Sep 13, 2005 11:06 pm |
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Psychic Trainer   Joined: Sun Jan 09, 2005 12:46 am Posts: 92 Location: Kuching
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Well,you saw it.It is 100% that every1 wants you to continue.
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| Wed Sep 14, 2005 6:31 am |
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Pokemon Master Joined: Sat Apr 16, 2005 3:29 am Posts: 1399 Location: Toenails
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It hasn't been one week yet
 and only 3 people have voted, but I think I'll continue it anyway. Hopefully the next chapter'll be up tomorrow.
EDIT: I'll be adding each chapter to my first post to make your reading more easy and pleasurable. I might, occasionally, also post to say that the new chapter is up. EDIT2: Well, Chapter 2 is up earlier than expected. _________________ <center> |
| Wed Sep 14, 2005 11:04 pm |
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is very close to getting banned Joined: Sat Jul 16, 2005 9:13 pm Posts: 2900 Location: Hiding under her bed.
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This is awesome! Giovanni the 2nd...how cool...
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| Thu Sep 15, 2005 12:55 am |
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Pokemon Master Joined: Sat Apr 16, 2005 3:29 am Posts: 1399 Location: Toenails
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Chapter 3 is up, hope you like it.
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| Sun Sep 18, 2005 3:20 am |
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Ace Trainer  Joined: Sat Jun 04, 2005 12:47 am Posts: 250 Location: New Zealand
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long yet interesting its nice
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| Sun Sep 18, 2005 6:02 am |
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