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2x4b
Pokemon Master
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:55 am Posts: 1456 Location: Stafford, UK
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Hi, If you want to read my new fic look at my latest post.
Last edited by 2x4b on Wed Nov 30, 2005 4:55 pm, edited 4 times in total.
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darkmagician2523
Ace Trainer
Joined: Wed Mar 16, 2005 7:55 am Posts: 361 Location: flying with starfire
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its good,but a little much like the others ![Sad :(](./images/smilies/icon_sad.gif) 7.5/10
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Thu Nov 03, 2005 8:47 pm |
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2x4b
Pokemon Master
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:55 am Posts: 1456 Location: Stafford, UK
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I've decided to tweek this fan-fic a bit, well I say a bit, I'm scrapping the whole idea of this fic and changing it to something more dark and mysterious, but also bright and funny.
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Mon Nov 21, 2005 2:08 pm |
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R2Breathe_fan
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Wed Jun 22, 2005 11:51 am Posts: 240 Location: At Team Inferno Base, training
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Xavier/Jamie.Is it just me or is anyone else in here also been in these 2 RPs?
New Pokemon RP
Pokemon Roleplay
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Mon Nov 21, 2005 5:48 pm |
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Flarey
is very close to getting banned
Joined: Sat Jul 16, 2005 9:13 pm Posts: 2900 Location: Hiding under her bed.
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Lol. 2x4b is Jamie. It's his character for everything! I'm willing to bet that he meets and falls in love with a Misty.
Nice first bit - it's good to see something even a bit different - he caught his own first Pokemon!
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Tue Nov 22, 2005 12:39 am |
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2x4b
Pokemon Master
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:55 am Posts: 1456 Location: Stafford, UK
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Ok guys as I said before keep looking for that latest post.
Last edited by 2x4b on Wed Nov 30, 2005 4:56 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Tue Nov 22, 2005 3:41 am |
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Flarey
is very close to getting banned
Joined: Sat Jul 16, 2005 9:13 pm Posts: 2900 Location: Hiding under her bed.
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I must profess I am disappointed. The other Fanfic you wrote was superior in every way - this is turning into another n00b Pokemon Fanfic. What happened to the pristine grammer? The good sized sentences, the paragraphs? The beautiful flow and speed of the story? You've made me sad, Jamie.. I hope this is just a facade and the story will improve - I know you can do it ![Wink :wink:](./images/smilies/icon_wink.gif)
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Tue Nov 22, 2005 3:59 am |
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2x4b
Pokemon Master
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:55 am Posts: 1456 Location: Stafford, UK
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CF I have to admit that I'm not brilliant at these types of fics, but hopefully it will improve.
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Tue Nov 22, 2005 4:17 am |
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Nidoman
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Tue Jul 12, 2005 4:42 am Posts: 751 Location: at my house... were do u think?
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it's ok but a bit n00bishj like CF said
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Tue Nov 22, 2005 2:53 pm |
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2x4b
Pokemon Master
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:55 am Posts: 1456 Location: Stafford, UK
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I am changing the fic now, I know I said I'd do it earlier but I've been busy, so if you could try not to post too much as I'm doing this it would be much appreaciated
*kryten2x4b*
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Wed Nov 23, 2005 1:13 pm |
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2x4b
Pokemon Master
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:55 am Posts: 1456 Location: Stafford, UK
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*poof*
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Wed Nov 30, 2005 4:54 pm |
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2x4b
Pokemon Master
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:55 am Posts: 1456 Location: Stafford, UK
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HELLO?! Can someone please read this and tell what they think! come on..... I'm cold and there are wolves after me.
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Thu Dec 08, 2005 6:02 am |
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R2Breathe_fan
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Wed Jun 22, 2005 11:51 am Posts: 240 Location: At Team Inferno Base, training
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kryten2x4b wrote: HELLO?! Can someone please read this and tell what they think! come on..... I'm cold and there are wolves after me.
![Laughing :lol:](./images/smilies/icon_laugh.gif) Were you meaning literally or are you also referring to how Angela in Pokemon Roleplay is attacking your character!By the way, have you noticed we're the only ones keeping it alive?!
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Fri Dec 09, 2005 9:19 pm |
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Flarey
is very close to getting banned
Joined: Sat Jul 16, 2005 9:13 pm Posts: 2900 Location: Hiding under her bed.
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Waaaaahhh!! I've read two paragraphis and if I could I'd be bawling! Noo!! Steven!! Agatha!! Noooo!!! Steven!! Waaahhh!!
*runs off crying*
((Don't worry, I'll come back and read the story later))
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Bartimeus
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Wed Dec 28, 2005 6:18 am Posts: 162 Location: The Other Place
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Wow. This is a really dark story. I really like it though. It's well written, with an interesting plot and dialogue that makes me want more. 8/10
That's all I have time to write, school tomorrow.
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R2Breathe_fan
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Wed Jun 22, 2005 11:51 am Posts: 240 Location: At Team Inferno Base, training
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Bartimeus wrote: Wow. This is a really dark story. I really like it though. It's well written, with an interesting plot and dialogue that makes me want more. 8/10
That's all I have time to write, school tomorrow.
You might want to know on Psypoke, only certain people can rate stories. Otherwise, you may accidently get this story locked!Just thought I'd warn you ahead of time.
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Tue Jan 03, 2006 8:40 pm |
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Truestar
Pokemon Master
Joined: Wed Jan 05, 2005 2:58 pm Posts: 1015 Location: New York, United States
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R2Breathe_fan wrote: Bartimeus wrote: Wow. This is a really dark story. I really like it though. It's well written, with an interesting plot and dialogue that makes me want more. 8/10
That's all I have time to write, school tomorrow.
You might want to know on Psypoke, only certain people can rate stories. Otherwise, you may accidently get this story locked!Just thought I'd warn you ahead of time.
Ever since the threads disappeared, regular users have been able to rate, but if you want to enforce this then yell at the other 20 members that rated too.
Regular users can rate, I've asked Mr. Minish when asking him if we should re-open the story rating thread, which was sadly a no. ![Sad :(](./images/smilies/icon_sad.gif)
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Tue Jan 10, 2006 5:54 pm |
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Kryten
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Sat Apr 02, 2005 11:09 am Posts: 974 Location: England, UK 3497 Psybucks
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I think the FF is aces. Continue+Practise=Progress! Don't bother reading people's posts if they say "Ewwww It's noobish" or "Errr it's naff and it stinks like my grandma's socks", keep at it! (P.S. I actually read the story! My concentration span is about as much as a pie is safe in front of a fat kid!)
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Wed Jan 11, 2006 2:00 pm |
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2x4b
Pokemon Master
Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:55 am Posts: 1456 Location: Stafford, UK
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*poof*
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Flarey
is very close to getting banned
Joined: Sat Jul 16, 2005 9:13 pm Posts: 2900 Location: Hiding under her bed.
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Insanely awesome, but I think we lost a chunk. Go to Edit it, and at the bottom select the check-box marked "Disable HTML in this post". That'll stop it thinking that your Telepthy is HTML, making it in Italics, thus fixing the problem.
I love this story. Absolutely love it. And yay, my favourite character is safe! Well, one of the two. Where's James from Team Rocket? He's my other most favouritest character, apart from Steven
Awesome story. Eleven Thumbs Up.
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marowak550
Psychic Trainer
Joined: Sun Mar 26, 2006 7:31 am Posts: 85 Location: Dublin. Ireland not Texas
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I realy like it oh and i love the thing about being cold and having wolves after you grandpa simpson influences us all
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Latiosdude
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Fri Jan 19, 2007 10:07 pm Posts: 155 Location: Blood is the best ink...
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It was pretty good keep on writing.
9.5/10
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