Noctowl awoke in the dead of night. he gazed around blindly, his eyesight slowly kicking in. His hearing was already quite sensitive, particularly to the loud alarm going off by his bed. He stretched his wings and turned the alarm off. An urgent message was coming from the radar facility. In another second Noctowl had flown out the windows of the mountain palace, set inside the huge central volcano on Pokemon Island, and was on his way to the other smaller island where Sudowoodo ran the radar centre.

Nidoking gave a grating laugh.
"I told you they would join us," He told his master. His master laughed back.
"We will see how Pokemon Island fares when Wigglytuff and her army serves US," Nidoking added. His master's face disappeared from the computer screen. Nidoking began to ready his massive blimp. Fearow circled around him as the machine rose to the night sky. It set off slowly acrtoss the starry night air.

Noctowl shot through the air, desperate to wake Wigglytuff. He screeched through the mountain's secret tunnels and came to rest in Wigglytuff's palace chamber.
"My lady?" He asked tentatively. Wigglytuff grumbled in her sleep.
"SCREEEEEEEEEECH!" Noctowl screamed. Wigglytuff leapt into the air, inflating to twice her size.
'NOCTOWL I DO NOT NEED YOU IN HERE SCREECHING IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT JUST BECAUSE SOME STUPID SENATOR WANTS ME TO SIGN A PIECE OF PAPER!!!!"
"Wigglytruff there is a crisis!" Noctowl started. Wigglytuff didn't want to hear it.
"I NEED COFFEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!" She hollered.
"The radar has just recieved word that a comet is heading for Pokemon Island,"
"What can we do?" She asked, suddenly worried.
"We must send all of our strpongest pokemon to the point of impact, from there they can attack the comet and deflect most of it as soon as it enters the atmosphere,"
"That won't be enough,"
"No, but we can send some of the army to the Mime fortresses, the Mimes will have the technology to help us fight the comet off,"
"The mimes have never agreed to a formal alliance," Wiglytuff pointed out.
"Yes but I'm sure they'll help this time, it's a matter of the island's destruction," Noctowl told her. Wigglytuff bit her lip.
"Wake the troops," She ordered.

Nidoking laughed louder as hisplan unfoiled.
"While they send all their defenses off to chase phantom comets we will invade. Pokemon Island will soon belong to Dark Forces!" He cooed. The Fearow around him started to screech in unison. Sudowoodo who had planted the fake comet transmission was now standing beside him.
"Let the war begin," He said.

This is the beginning of a four part book I wrote in high school. I can put the rest up if anyone is interested. it gets really complicated. Dark Forces take over the island, General Arbok leads a group to fight the comet but find out it's not real, and have to get back to the island without their boat and with Dark Force pokemon chasing them, meanwhile Slowking goes to the mimes to ask for help but they tell him the comet isn't real and that Dark Forces have invaded. Before theycan go back, the mime city is attacked and invaded by the Unown. Lots of twists and stuff. Wigglytuff goes off in the palace batte against Nidoking. Let me know if you wanna read the rest.

I could give it 5/10.I don't really like military,war and etc stories.I prefer funny ones like the Poketalk at lolstop

Its pretty good but the paragraphs need to be indented.


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