These are my first sprites.Please rate!
And here is a Lugia:
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| Author: | Psyho Milotic [ Sat Mar 25, 2006 4:53 am ] |
| Post subject: | My first fused sprites (trainer) |
These are my first sprites.Please rate!
And here is a Lugia:
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| Author: | Lugia_Champion [ Sat Mar 25, 2006 5:41 am ] |
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The sprites are nice,but the third one is a bit weird.You must have done in in the paint progam.Good Job,however. 6.3/10 |
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| Author: | rubypoke [ Sat Mar 25, 2006 6:31 am ] |
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The first one is very nice, I like it. 8/10 The second is pretty good but the outline is too think. 6/10 The third, hmm, the trousers ruin it. 6/10 The Lugia, you just inverted it lol. 3/10 Very nice work though, oh and... Welcome to Psypoke! |
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| Author: | Omanlew [ Sat Mar 25, 2006 7:55 pm ] |
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these are very good, especiallty for ur first time |
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| Author: | Gardevoir1313 [ Sun Mar 26, 2006 6:51 am ] |
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Very nice. The bottom trainer creeps me out, though ^_^ 6.8/10 The Lugia's an invert, I can tell that much. 3/10 |
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| Author: | Gamer T [ Sun Mar 26, 2006 8:10 am ] |
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i like the first one think it is colored rite the second one needs.. something special to really bring out the colors the 3rd one makes me think of my 80 year old grandma dance the tango  but i like it
7/10 |
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| Author: | Psyho Milotic [ Mon Mar 27, 2006 6:21 am ] |
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I know granny is weird but lugia I put in just for fun. |
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| Author: | Gardevoir1313 [ Mon Mar 27, 2006 3:30 pm ] |
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If you want, I can edit your Lugia to make it a bit more un-inverted...it looks like a shiny the way it is now ^_^ |
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| Author: | bobashotmace [ Tue Mar 28, 2006 1:02 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: My first fused sprites (trainer) |
5/10 No outline on the green flap thingy by the legs, can't tall what it is, like, I mean, I know, but I don't know the word I'm looking for, it's not shaded very well too (a lot of places not at all) plus the flaps too light, the tops of the wings need at least a light outline and the boots are just plain pitiful. 2/10 The knee is bent too sharply, and it's point, and has a weird inward arch on the upper part of it, the outline also is the wrong colour. The big orange thing in the back (that one I'm not sure and there's a few things it could be) needs a lot more shading, and a lot more detail. The entire thing needs more detail, more shading, joints need to be rounded and... ya. 5/10 Colour scheme is... strange, the hair needs some touching up, the right arm is at a very strange angle, the blue bits on the hands just look weird, the left arm's shoulder sags too much and is coming out of his back, the legs are far too rigid and need shading, some detail on the entire thing except the head would greatly help also. |
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