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Author: | Kyogre356 [ Sat Apr 29, 2006 8:26 am ] |
Post subject: | Mirages |
Dan:"What a great day!" :"I'll say!" Then, Ash came! Dan:"Ash!?! What are you doing here?" Ash:"A battle of course! Go, !" Dan:"Go, !" :"Unown." Ash:" , Solar Beam!" :"Un!" Dan:" , return! Go, !" Ash"Yes! Go, !" Dan:" , Secret Fire!" :"Moleo!" :"Char!" Ash:" , Overheat!" Dan:" , doge it and use Overheat!" :"Mol!" Ash:" , return! Go, !" Dan:"Alright! Go, !" ================================================== Who will win? or ? here it is... I'll tell ya later! |
Author: | Sneaky Sneasel [ Sat Apr 29, 2006 8:45 am ] |
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I'm sorry, but this is way to short to be considered a chapter for a fanfiction. Also, it's barely legible with a picture of a Pokemon every other word. |
Author: | Kyogre356 [ Sun Apr 30, 2006 8:04 am ] |
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I,m a bit rushed, so I can't use the word. [Or make big chapteres]. |
Author: | Sneaky Sneasel [ Sun Apr 30, 2006 8:07 am ] |
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Then type it on Microsoft Word or even Notepad, then copy and paste when you are done with the chapter. |
Author: | Kyogre356 [ Sun Apr 30, 2006 8:22 am ] |
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Thanks! |
Author: | ShinyMew151 [ Sat May 13, 2006 5:30 pm ] |
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i think you did pretty good. |
Author: | Kyogre356 [ Sun May 21, 2006 6:46 am ] |
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It's been a while! ================================================== Ash:"Pikachu, Thunder Bolt!" Dan:"Venasaur, stand still." Bz. Venasaur was hit alright, but it was not effective.Dan:"Venasuar, Strength!" :"Ven-a-SAUR!" :"Pik!" Pikachu was hit. Ash:"Pikachu, Iorn Tail!" :"Ven!" Venasaur was hit! Dan:"Venasaur, load!" Venasaur took in sunlight! Ash:"Pikachu, get on Venasaur's bulb and use Thunder Bolt!" Dan:"Venasaur, Solar Beam!" BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Pikachu and Venasaur fanted! ================================================== All for now! |
Author: | Lapras_lover [ Sun May 21, 2006 11:00 am ] |
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There is no move called load just say solar beam and it will be understood that it has to take in sunlight. These posts are very short and way too rushed. Try writing each chapter on word then when your done with it copy and paste. Even with long posts it isnt very good try to be more descriptive but otherwise its a solid plotline. |
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