Bring Me to Life

Irene

Finally, it

Wow, that's kind of creepy.

But, none the less, it is a good story.

Wow, yu have an extremely creative mind, and the ending was a complete bang, but yah, what Daveshan wrote, a little creepy

Thanks very much to both of you. And it was intended to be creepy, so it's good that I was able to get that across.

Wow! Great story. One-shots are always fun since you don't have to follow a long story, and you did a great job. I think you should try posting this up in other places if you haven't already!

Thanks Banov, and I have posted else where. And I agree, if one just wants to read and they aren't in the mood for reading multiple chapters a long story has, one-shots are the prefect solution. The worst is when people don't know what a one-shot is and they post a story with multiple chapters.

Yeah, that can get annoying, I'd imagine. Never seen it happen, though. ^^"

Wow, the sheer creativnes of this story just amazes me man, you really should put s ome more of these up, it is fun, and creepy at the same time. I love it.

And I support the one-shot theory too

I have, thank you. I'm surprised to have seen you post again, but flattered all the same.