good story i liked it a lot!
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| Author: | DarkPhantom02 [ Wed Aug 02, 2006 1:10 pm ] |
| Post subject: | The Journey (ages 11+) |
Chapter 1 Micah, a boy of mere 15, woke up one morning to the brilliant sunshine streaming into his room. As he sat up, he looked at the alarm clock on the bedstand next to his bed. 7:15. He had woken up just in time. Today was a special day. Today was the day that he would get his own first pokemon. He had no idea on what to get and what to name or anything. He was just soo excited that his day had finally come. All the other kids in his town already had pokemon. His best friend, Lilly, had chosen a ralts as her pokemon and named her Psy. His neighbor, Jonathan had chosen a simple squirtle. He had always had a soft spot for water pokemon. Micah got out of bed and went to his closet to pick his clothes that he would wear for the day. He finally decided on a blue t-shirt and a pair of khaki shorts. As he got ready for the day (brushing hair, teeth, etc.), he thought of the possible pokemon he might get. He finally decided that he would get a fire pokemon or maybe even a dark pokemon. He jus hoped that thy had those types available for him. Micah walked downstairs, welcoming the aromas of breakfast. Micah's mother, Julia, was known as the best cook in Rorlin Town. When Micah reached the bottom of the stairs and made it to the kitchen, his mother and father were already at the table, helping themselves to the eggs and bacon. Micah walked over to join them. "So, today's the day!" said Micah excitedly to his parents, while putting food on his plate. "Yes, it is. Do you have any idea on what pokemon you're going to choose?" asked Julia. "No, but I do have an idea on the types I might get," he replied. "Oh," said his father, Joseph, "what are they?" "I was thinking either dark or fire. I don't know though," Micah said, stuffing some eggs into his mouth. "Why don't you get a combonation of both?" asked Joseph. "I didn't know they had pokemon that are dark and fire types." "Yes, there's only one I know of, but it is a very good pokemon. It called Houndour," explained Joseph to his son, who was listening with great interest, "It is basically just a puppy. But when it evolves, it will become a great pokemon: Houndoom." Micah was mesmerized at the thought of a fire pup, and then hearing the name "Houndoom" mesmerized him even more. Noticing their son deep in thought, Micah's parents left him to his thoughts as they finished breakfast in silence. After breakfast, Micah helped his mother with the dishes. When they were done, they left the house and walked over the Pokemon Lab on the other side of town. As they walked, they looked around at their charming home town or Rorlin. The neighbors were out and about. Some occasionally looked up at the family and smiled. Some said "hi" and others just waved. When they arrived at their destination, the great building loomed over them. The building was huge compared to the rest of town. The red words on the front of the building clearly siad "Pokemon Lab" on the white building. As they walked up the steps, the doors slid open for them. When they walked in, a hologram turned on. Micah was startled, since this was the first time he had been here. No non-trainers were allowed, unless they were getting their first pokemon, as in Micah's case. "Welcome to the Pokemon Lab," said the male hologram, "What is the purpose of your visit?" Julia and Joseph were quiet and they looked to Micah. He understood that, becaue they were here for him, he would be inquiring. Micah stepped up and said, "I'm here to get a pokemon." "Take the elevator up to the third floor. Its the lsecond door on the right." With that the hologram shut off. "Okay, let's go," said Julia, "We must hurry because I have to get to work. There's going to be press there today." Micah's mother was the Gym Leader of Silverport City, which was just a couple of miles away. Her speciality was ice pokemon. The family trio walked over to the elevator. The door beeped and then opened, revealing a short man with large spectacles. "What floor?" said his high-pitched voice. "Three, please," said Micah, feeling nausous from excitement and nervousness. As the elevator slowly made its way up, the man said, "You choosing a pokemon?" Micah was surprised by the question and just nodded. "Do you have an idea on what your going to choose?" "Houndour," Micah said quickly. "Oh, good pokemon." Micah just smiled. The elevator stopped, the bell dinged, and the doors opened, revealing a huge floor of grass with bits of large grass in clumps everywhere. Micah was astonished as he walked out of the elevator. "Good luck," said the little elevator man. Good luck? Micah thought, Why would I need luck. All I'm doing is choosing a pokemon . . . I think. They made their way through the grass. Micah was about to step into one of the tall grass clusters when Joseph quickly pulled himm away. Micah was confused. "You can't go in there, yet. There's wild pokemon in there," he explained. "Oh," said Micah, hitting himself on the head for being so naive. They made it to the second door on the right and it said "Starters" in bright blue letters. The family stepped into the room. When they closed the door, they saw a room full of shelves, labels, and pokeballs. Micah saw that it was all very organized. The shelves were labeled with the different types, and then there were special shelves where there were combo types. Micah read them down until he found the one labeled as "Fire/Dark". He stood on his tiptoes to see the top of the shelf to see how many pokeballs were there. Just one. Great thought Micah, Watch there be no Houndour. "Welcome, I am Professor Pine. I'll be helping you today," said a woman from behind a counter, "Now, I suppose you're here for this young man to get his first pokemon." Micah nodded. "What's your name?" asked Prof. Pine. "Micah," he replied. Prof. Pine wrote this down on a piece of paper and resumed to ask him questions such as how old he was, what were his favorite types, etc. When the questioning had finished, she read over the paper and looked around at the shelves and said, "I'm guessing that you'll be wanting a good strong pokemon . . . and if you told me the truth for these questions . . . I'm guessing that you'll be wanting a Houndour!" Micah almost gasped in surprise. "Yeah, how did you know?" "By paying attention," she replied casually. She walked over to the shelf labeled "Fire/Dark" and picked up the lone pokeball. She handed it to Micah saying, "Call it out. Meet your new pokemon." To be continued . . . ----------------------- What did ya'll think. I just love to write, so I just let it pour out. I tried to think of new ways to get a new pokemon instead of the old boring way of choosing one of the original three types and new ways to get it and stuff. I'm just thinking of a whole new approach to the pokemon universe. What do you think? |
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| Author: | daveshan [ Wed Aug 02, 2006 9:31 pm ] |
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Um...It's not a bad story. Thing is, I don't know if this is a horrible coincidence or not, someone made a fanfic called Decissions and Consequences. http://www.psypokes.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=5886 |
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| Author: | DarkPhantom02 [ Thu Aug 03, 2006 5:28 am ] |
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daveshan wrote: Thing is, I don't know if this is a horrible coincidence or not, someone made a fanfic called Decissions and Consequences. HOly Bleepers. I had no idea that there was one called Decisions and Consequences! I'll change my title immediatly. Oh, thnx for the comment. |
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| Author: | Crimson [ Fri Aug 11, 2006 10:25 pm ] |
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Looks good, but I wouldn't use the little images of the pokemon. It's very distracting, they break the flow of the words. Just type it out, and the beginning will flow better. |
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| Author: | prayermage6 [ Mon Oct 02, 2006 4:25 pm ] |
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good story i liked it a lot!
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| Author: | pokemon master 1995 [ Mon Oct 16, 2006 1:59 pm ] |
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good story. |
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| Author: | LocoLatino2600 [ Mon Oct 23, 2006 6:40 pm ] |
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really good!...really hoks you from the beggining and i agree its boring just choosing 3 starters....send me a private pm with the sequel 
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| Author: | mew da real suger baby [ Wed Feb 21, 2007 3:34 pm ] |
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The storys cool |
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| Author: | mooxy [ Tue Feb 27, 2007 10:05 am ] |
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Wow, I loved it! Keep going! Great choice of  , by the way!
But why is it 11+? I think younger people would be interested in this story too! I'm just glad my 11th birthday was in January! |
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| Author: | shadowman777 [ Tue Feb 27, 2007 10:50 am ] |
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I like how your story has a lot of details and dosent just go from one thing to another |
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| Author: | StevensNightmare [ Fri Mar 09, 2007 11:08 pm ] |
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Yes, please continue! Any story that involves hot dark puppies has to be cool! |
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