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 My first fused sprites (trainer) 
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These are my first sprites.Please rate!
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And here is a Lugia:
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The sprites are nice,but the third one is a bit weird.You must have done in in the paint progam.Good Job,however.
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The first one is very nice, I like it. 8/10

The second is pretty good but the outline is too think. 6/10

The third, hmm, the trousers ruin it. 6/10

The Lugia, you just inverted it lol. 3/10

Very nice work though, oh and...

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these are very good, especiallty for ur first time

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Very nice. The bottom trainer creeps me out, though ^_^ 6.8/10

The Lugia's an invert, I can tell that much. 3/10

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Sun Mar 26, 2006 6:51 am
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i like the first one think it is colored rite
the second one needs.. something special to really bring out the colors
the 3rd one makes me think of my 80 year old grandma dance the tango :lol: but i like it
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I know granny is weird but lugia I put in just for fun.

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If you want, I can edit your Lugia to make it a bit more un-inverted...it looks like a shiny the way it is now ^_^

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5/10 No outline on the green flap thingy by the legs, can't tall what it is, like, I mean, I know, but I don't know the word I'm looking for, it's not shaded very well too (a lot of places not at all) plus the flaps too light, the tops of the wings need at least a light outline and the boots are just plain pitiful.

2/10
The knee is bent too sharply, and it's point, and has a weird inward arch on the upper part of it, the outline also is the wrong colour. The big orange thing in the back (that one I'm not sure and there's a few things it could be) needs a lot more shading, and a lot more detail. The entire thing needs more detail, more shading, joints need to be rounded and... ya.

5/10
Colour scheme is... strange, the hair needs some touching up, the right arm is at a very strange angle, the blue bits on the hands just look weird, the left arm's shoulder sags too much and is coming out of his back, the legs are far too rigid and need shading, some detail on the entire thing except the head would greatly help also.

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