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rockey212
Psychic Trainer
Joined: Thu Jun 23, 2005 6:34 am Posts: 85 Location: Florida
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Yu-Gi-Oh Meets Pokemon: Chapter One: The Duel
Ash: Well Brock, where are we heading for now?
Brock: It looks like we
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Tue Sep 20, 2005 4:40 am |
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Swampert King
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Tue Aug 09, 2005 1:29 pm Posts: 626 Location: ^ Turkey. :D ^
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Super funny! 4.5 stars! {starmie}{starmie}{starmie} HALF OF STARMIE
You should tell how Joey ended up in Kanto though.
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Tue Sep 20, 2005 6:12 pm |
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Pokemon Master Ryo
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Mon Sep 12, 2005 4:24 pm Posts: 571 Location: #alpha
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Very funny 5/5.You should make a other chapter soon.
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Tue Sep 20, 2005 6:16 pm |
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Truestar
Pokemon Master
Joined: Wed Jan 05, 2005 2:58 pm Posts: 1015 Location: New York, United States
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Wow.
You sure haven't put enough character into the dialogue. That needs a lot of work. And Yu-Gi-Oh & Pokemon? You're legally insane.
<center> Offical Story Rater Rating
2/5
Rater: Truestar</center>
It may seem like a harsh rate, but I was thinking about a one, luckily, you payed a lot of attention to puncuation and the technical stuff. Keep that up, but I don't think Yu-Gi-Oh should go with Pokemon. That's my opinion though.
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Tue Sep 20, 2005 6:41 pm |
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Magcargo
Ace Trainer
Joined: Sat Jun 04, 2005 12:47 am Posts: 250 Location: New Zealand
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3/5
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Wed Sep 21, 2005 12:52 am |
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rockey212
Psychic Trainer
Joined: Thu Jun 23, 2005 6:34 am Posts: 85 Location: Florida
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I do have I think 2 more chapters:) But I think I will tell how Joey got into (insert generation here), good idea:)
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Wed Sep 21, 2005 4:03 am |
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Undeadcutlet
Pokemon Master
Joined: Sat Apr 16, 2005 3:29 am Posts: 1399 Location: Toenails
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Sorry but I really don't like the script form. My own problem I suppose but I still don't like it. Of course others may like it. Yeah. People seem to be enjoying it though, so keep it going.
2/5
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Wed Sep 21, 2005 4:06 am |
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Latios
Pokemon Master
Joined: Sat Oct 23, 2004 10:10 pm Posts: 1090 Location: Texas
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Yeah the script form wasn't that great. I thought it was creative though so 8/10 very,very creative.
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Thu Jan 12, 2006 5:14 pm |
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TheKyogress
Bug Catcher
Joined: Wed Feb 08, 2006 10:59 am Posts: 12
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I didn't like it so much, but it was funny, I'll give ya that.. no offense! but 2.5/5
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Wed Feb 08, 2006 10:38 pm |
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Xin
Psychic Trainer
Joined: Thu Feb 02, 2006 1:42 pm Posts: 72 Location: The True North, Strong and Free~
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Cute, and you kept the punctuation and whatnot pretty good, so that earns you some credit. But the idea, amusing as it is at a glance, doesn't seem to do so well in the script form.
Plus... Seto going goo-goo eyed over someone? Tres Out-of-Character. Buuut... I'm gonna end this off with a 2/5.
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Fri Feb 10, 2006 9:54 pm |
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marowak550
Psychic Trainer
Joined: Sun Mar 26, 2006 7:31 am Posts: 85 Location: Dublin. Ireland not Texas
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nice idea but kinda rushed and poorly executed
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Why yes Govener I would love a copy of the argos catalouge
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Sun Mar 26, 2006 2:42 pm |
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Regi
Bug Catcher
Joined: Fri Mar 31, 2006 11:49 pm Posts: 17 Location: Neptune :P
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Outright halarious! lol
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Tue Apr 04, 2006 10:41 pm |
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RUBEN
Psychic Trainer
Joined: Fri Apr 28, 2006 10:06 pm Posts: 50 Location: ......?
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WOW! I put it 99/5
Please, don't post excessive numbering or punctuation.
~Galar
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Mon May 01, 2006 12:11 pm |
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ShinyMew151
Pokemon Trainer
Joined: Wed May 10, 2006 2:41 pm Posts: 32 Location: at computer
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I really liked that story i thought it was very good.
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Sat May 13, 2006 4:05 pm |
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latido
Bug Catcher
Joined: Mon Jul 03, 2006 7:23 pm Posts: 5
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i laughed my head off .................lol
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Wed Jul 05, 2006 8:46 am |
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Banov
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Tue Jun 06, 2006 8:14 pm Posts: 149 Location: PA, USA
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Isn't that necroposting?
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