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 Pokemon Meets Yu-Gi-Oh 
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Yu-Gi-Oh Meets Pokemon: Chapter One: The Duel

Ash: Well Brock, where are we heading for now?
Brock: It looks like we

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Super funny! 4.5 stars! {starmie}{starmie}{starmie}{starmie}HALF OF STARMIE
You should tell how Joey ended up in Kanto though.

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Very funny 5/5.You should make a other chapter soon.


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Wow.

You sure haven't put enough character into the dialogue. That needs a lot of work. And Yu-Gi-Oh & Pokemon? You're legally insane. :wink:

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It may seem like a harsh rate, but I was thinking about a one, luckily, you payed a lot of attention to puncuation and the technical stuff. Keep that up, but I don't think Yu-Gi-Oh should go with Pokemon. That's my opinion though.

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3/5 :mrgreen:

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Wed Sep 21, 2005 12:52 am
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I do have I think 2 more chapters:) But I think I will tell how Joey got into (insert generation here), good idea:)

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Sorry but I really don't like the script form. My own problem I suppose but I still don't like it. Of course others may like it. Yeah. People seem to be enjoying it though, so keep it going.

2/5

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Yeah the script form wasn't that great. I thought it was creative though so 8/10 very,very creative.

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I didn't like it so much, but it was funny, I'll give ya that.. no offense! but 2.5/5

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Cute, and you kept the punctuation and whatnot pretty good, so that earns you some credit. But the idea, amusing as it is at a glance, doesn't seem to do so well in the script form.

Plus... Seto going goo-goo eyed over someone? Tres Out-of-Character. Buuut... I'm gonna end this off with a 2/5.

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nice idea but kinda rushed and poorly executed

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Outright halarious! lol


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WOW! I put it 99/5

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I really liked that story i thought it was very good.


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i laughed my head off :lol:.................lol

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Isn't that necroposting?


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