They're all very nice restorations, you've clearly been quite careful with the colours, especially on the outlines. Gold/Silver revamps are hard, but you fixed up the shading, and did a good job of redrawing the areas that are dithered in G/S. Some of them (articuno, first lanturn) look like they could use a little individual touch-up, though; the articuno's feather-tuft has very dark outlines, and the lanturn's nose is sort of shiny underneath, he might also benefit from a bit of dark shadow where you removed the smile.
Kyogre'd be hard to revamp, Kyogre356, seeing as how he's 3rd gen
Also, it's not very polite to make unsolicited requests outside of the Slateport market.
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