You and Mudky were at the lake. Mudky had a suprising talent for learning new moves, he learned hydro pump and earthquake very early on, around LV. 10. You always wondered why, but you concluded that it was because of his father, Mudkye, your first pokemon, your best friend, your partner. You wished you knew where Mudkye was, he disappeared that day, three weeks ago. Mudky was very small for a Mudkip, he always was, but this was contrasted in his moveset (Hydro pump, Earthquake, Ice beam, surf).


You noticed your friend Red coming down the hill. Red was a tough-guy, he wore black jeans, and a grey plain T-shirt. He had a mop of brown hair, and cold, blue eyes. "I brought you some coins" He said. Red had taken you under his wing ever since that day when you washed up on shore, with Mudky clinging to you. "Thanks man" You said happily. "No problem." He said. "But Tek, there is something I need to talk to you about." He said, in a dark tone not suited for him. "what?" "Your past, there is a lot you've forgotten about it.""You wouldn't know about my past Red." I said forcefully. "yeah, actually, I would. Does this bring back memories, Blazer, Ka'ding, Latias, Latios, flamer" And he went on and on and on, with a bunch of names, and then you had a strange image come to your head......


You saw a Wingull Fly above your head. You watched it fly over towards a mountain; then you saw a large blue, dolphin like thing jump out of the water and you thought: Ka'ding. But why Ka'Ding? What is a Ka'ding?

"Nope, none of those names bring back anything Red" "When will you remember?" He shouted angrliy. "What the heck is wrong with you today? Why are you so-" Something you didn't expect came next: A punch in the face.

You went sprawling into the grass. "What was that for?" you shouted. "Charizard, Go!" Red shouted. A charizard came out of a master ball, only this was not an ordinary Charizard, it was dark purple, with white colorings. It horrified you. "What have you done to it?" You screamed. "heh heh, shadow pokemon technology." Red replied. "Now Charizard, Use Shadow Blast burn!" You saw the monstrous thing summon an orb of fire to its mouth, and right before the stream of flame hit you; "kip kip!" Mudky Jumped down and used Hydro Pump, Holding off the blast burn. Mudky and the Charizard continued to have a power struggle, until you grabbed Mudky, and ran, and you heard the stream of fire crash behind you.

You ran as far as you could. You saw the entire forest go up in flames behind you. You didn't care, you wanted to run away from life, your best friend had just tried to kill you, your house was gone, your life was gone, it was you and Mudky, all alone.

You collasped. You noticed that Mudky had used all his energy protecting you. "Thank you Mudky." You gasped. "mud.......mudki.........mud........." He looked sick, and he had suffered some burns.

You saw Red and his Charizard fly over the burning forest. "CHARIZAAAAAAAAAAAARD!!!!!!!" The Charizard cried, seeing you on the ground . "Huh? Tek is still breathing........Charizard, kill them this time." Red commanded the Charizard. You opened your eyes for what you thought would be the last time, you felt Mudky Squeeze against your chest. You prayed that this was a dream, only it wasn't it was real, every detail and every second of absolute death flying towards you but then........

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~chapter two~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The Prayer didn't work, you got hit by the flames. You could feel them twist around your body, but strangely, they were not as hot as you expected. You looked to see the fire, it turned out to be very small. was . You looked up. You saw a strange yellow shield between you and the fire. "Are you ok?" A voice said. You looked up to find a girl in a purple outfit, with litish pink hair that flew behind her. "I saw that you had fallen, so I came to see what was the matter. then I saw that Charizard, if that is what it was, shoot all that fire at you. I told my Wobuffet to protect you with a reflect. "Thanks, I would have been dead" "No problem, but is your Mudkip ok?" " I think he's sick, he ran out of energy while fighting Charizard." "Ill take care of this affair, Gardevoir! Go!" Psycho boost now!" a Gardevoir came out of a pokeball and then summoned a purple swirling energy, then shot it in a large wheel at the Charizard. "Chaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar!!!!!!!!!!!!" The Charizard screamed, and Red fell off. The girl ran off in the direction that Red fell. She got there in time to see Red get up off the ground. "uh.............................Charizard................Return" He groaned. He picked himself up off the ground. "You won't get away!" The girl yelled. "watch this." Red said. "Skarmory, Fly!" and at that, a metallic bird picked him up and swept him away.
When you woke up again, you were in a room with a lot of pink flowers decorating the wall, and pictures of strong psychic pokemon, such as an alakazam, and a small flying mousey-looking thing with the word MEW under it. Then the girl walked in. "Here is some tea for you, and some water and medicine for your Mudkip." "What happened?" You asked. "You fainted, then my Gardevoir and I dragged you into my room. My mom will be mad when she sees the forest on fire, and that I brought a boy home."

Well, before I begin reading this, I demand that you fix up your grammar. One or two grammar mistakes is fine, but ths blobby mess of text is... a little painful for me to read. Good grammar is the difference between good and bad fanficiton in many cases.

Sorry about not posting in a while, Kinda busy with school (last few weeks and we are STILL having 100pt tests) so I am not sure when the next chapter will come out. And sorry for the grammar mistakes, my keyboard is well, wierd.

Grammar mistakes hurt me eyes. I understand the school business, but when you get a chance plese try to do something....

my school is out now, and due to popular demand (all 1 out of 1 readers of my fanfic) want me to fix my grammar, so I have updated my first post, hope it is better

I'll fix my second enstallment tommorrow if I get the chance......

BTW if I overlooked anything plz just tell me.

Yes, I agree with Banov, you should improve your grammar. And don't blame it on your keyboard, because that's just an excuse for not bothering to use correct grammar.

And how can a Mudkip learn Hydro Pump at Level 10? How can a Gardevoir learn Psycho Boost?

Oh, and each new set of quotes is a new paragraoh. Seperate your paragraphs with a ful empty line in between them.

Like I just did. It looks much cleaner this way.

"Does it really?" Luke asked, crawling out of the world of Banov's imagination.

"Get back in there!" Banov shouted in retort.

"But YOU were the one who called me out to make an example of how spoken parts should be paragraphed."

"...."

Otherwie, minus the odd mistakes in grammar, the story's really exciting- what you came up with is a great idea. Now you need to take the steps to make sure your own writing is worthy of the idea.

mudkipman,
cool story i like it. good job and keep up the good work

Quick question? Why is it in second person?

Ok, this fanfic has bombed no one really likes it here except a few people

If you really want me to keep adding, just PM me, but I have a really good idea for a new fanfic, which will be better then this one.

And finally, I got microsoft word, so I can copy and paste without it getting messed up. The old program I used wasn't very good, and it was made like a million years ago so when you copy and paste, it screws stuff up.

Still, this story had bad grammar, I had pokemon use moves they can't learn, I tried to do it to be fun and creative, but people didn't really like it so I will stop adding to this fanfic and create my new one which I promise will have good spelling, grammar, etc.

P.S if stoping a fanfic and creating a new one is against the rules, just PM me, I read the fanfic rules and didn't see anything about but still, I want to be safe and clean. Thank you.