My ash



My typhlosion




I'm only 11 ,so think about a 11 year old making that on paint!

That Ash is awsome!A+++

Why do you people save things as .jpg? At least .gif if you insist on making it horrible quality by refusing to save as a png...

What I'm trying to say is, SAVE AS A PNG.

The Ash is nice, except for the graininess because its a jpg. Rather crude, but I think that it looks nice. Maybe curve the line on the hat a little bit.

The Typholosion, you should work on the feet, eyes, mouth, and hands a bit. Make him slightly skinner. Personally, I don't like this one as much as ash, but that doesn't mean it's bad.

Ash looks pretty cool. Typhlosion looks squished down. You should add a thin black line around typhlosions arm, body, leg, etc. But nice work.

i am gonna be honest by what i think. the ash is good but the hat needs more of a straight curve I THINK. (remember i'm saying what i think) the pokemon.. ty something i'm a horrible spelling so im not gonna try lol. anyway i think it's rly cute!! a little wider than should be but that doesnt matter i still think it's rly cute. the pictures look like the colors are starting to blend tho.... i think maybe some thin black outlining will fix that but u DONT HAVE TO LISTEN TO ME. it's ur drawing so, ya. but for doing it on the computer... it's rly rly good!! mine would probably look like blobs or color. hehe

im gunna be hosent like espoen girl...they both need ......:
1.Proportion.....a mini list coming up:
ASh:
ears are of a diferent size
cap has wonkey lines
you have used diferent lines in the wrong places
TYPHLOSION:
arms dont look like that
theeth arnt curved
2. shading (makes it look 3d)
3.outline..anime stuff looks better with 1
....i rate it */*****

but its a good first atempt

:O You use mspaint? I couldn't do that to save my life!

10/10.

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