Ok, a couple of you might have rememberd from a long time ago I posted like one fan fic, anyways I'm back with another, this one is pokemon! yaaaay!

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Nate sat in the back seat of a brand new Catolac. It was a brilliant car, it was the newest model, and of course the most expensive. It was small, but it boasted a chrome finishing and durability beyond most cars. The sleek silver shined fantastically in the warm August day.

He was coming home from a swim a meet, he was an excellent swimmer. Despite the fact that he was only ten, he had a lot on his mind. Increasing trouble was growing between his parents, and they still would not let him have a Pokemon. For some reason they thought he was not responsible enough. His mother was not as opposed to the idea as his father, however both remained adamant in there opinion of not letting him have a Pokemon.

Well, he had a lot to be thankful for, after all, his family was the richest family in Lilycove. His father owned the biggest Pokemart in the world, in fact it could hardly be called a mart, it was more like a mall.

The brazen swung open and Nate looked out and saw to his surprise that both of his parents were waiting outside for him. The door was opened for him and Nate stepped out onto the walk to the manor.

mmm! quite interesting, your work is a good idea.

what

Yay someone posted ok well the next chapter may not be done for a few days but when it is, you guys'll be the first to know

it's ok, heck my name's nate.

But you see, I think the best thing for you is:

GET A TITLE!

That's the best thing for you.

yes next chapter please!!!!!

i like this story.

Very good. Waiting for the next part!

try 'Devestation' for a title. And please go on.

Wow, a 7-months necromancy.

I am very aware that there shouldn't really be a "Necromancy" rule for this Forum, but replying with one-line comments is just unacceptable. Specially to one that's been theorically dead for, what, more than 6 months. You are free to reply with interesting and smart comments to old topics, but please try to make "old" and "smart" reasonable. "This is very nice keep it up" and 7-months-old is in no way reasonable for smart and old, keep that in mind.

The next time I see this I might as well delete the replies instead of locking the topic, because seeing this kind of replies, after I've made a huge announcement about it, and posting a rather visible Rules thread regarding the matter makes me think you are either trying our patience or wanting to raise your post counts. Either way is bad. You have my warning, stop trying to look like fools. The writter will continue to post their story when they can and if they want to.

Also, Ribitta, when you get back, and wish to keep this up, please contact a Moderator to have this unlocked for you, okay?

Until then,

~Locked