Do another legendary one.

Did you copy me by that Starmie rating thing? I rate like =1 star outta 5.

The story of ...(Jirachi is the only Legendary I know nothing about except its looks. So if I get its lifestyle 100% wrong please tell me lol)

{most of this will be in Jirachi's view}

Where am I now? I was flying over a beautiful forest, but its turned into a big place with massive things in. Oh a Berry Forest! ~Rushes over~ mmmm Oran berries so revitalising! mmmm...

[A Pidgey appeared]

Ack! No go away my berries *Hits pidgey* Fly away!... Hey you fly away too! *{mew} was flying over* I said go away! Hey, my berries, no shoo dont come near me!

*Mew just came down next to Jirachi and transformed into her and did what she did e.g *

Hey dont do that! *Mew went back to normal* *Jirachi used psychic, Mew blasted into a tree and broke it.* Hehehehe you deserved you... you berry stealer!

*As Mew could do any move she wished she started to go a bit red and let out heaps of fire out of her mouth.* ARGHH! *The whole forest lit up in flames.* I'll get you back, I will! You rotton pig coloured prat! *Mew turned around and kicked Jirachi*

*Jirachi's face went to she had supposedly turned good again, Mew knocked the bad sense out of her* Ack! Where am I, I was eating berries but now... *turns around* ACK! Its all on fire, hot and burning... My fault!

*Mew whispered to Jirachi* Oh how dumb of me! *Jirachi started to sing. As she sang, the forest stopped burning, the trees re-grew and the leaves and berries went back on. Jirachi fell to sleep but stayed hovering there.*

*A pidgey flew into Jirachi but it protected itself.*

I might stop doing these, Im pretty getting bored writing them and I cant write them good.

errmm,sorry but it made NO sense at all.
i think ur kinda goin down-hill


4.5/10

2/10. Sorry.

Blastoise...

A young Wartortle wandered around a long sandy beach, Trapinches kept jumping on its large shell.

This Wartortle had a massive shell, 3 times the size of normal Wartorle shells.
One day Wartortle felt a massive spiky pain in its back, like things were pricking it, large things...
He went to see other pokemon and asked if they knew, all they said was 'growing pains, I had em.'
Wartortle couldnt take it, the pain was everywhere, his mother said it was just sand stuck in his shell.

So another day Wartortle hid in shell and span around, sand came out, but the pain didnt go, large pains everywhere.
Then he realised his toes had grown during the night, they were massive now. Also his long bushy tail was dissapering and a small blue tail popped out.
His mother didnt know what to say.
His white ears turned to short blue doggy ears.
The pain had mostly stopped except his shell was really hurting, he got to sleep and hoped it would go away.
The next morning he woke up... and there sticking out of his shell were two weird grey things. Then he sneezed and water started going everywhere out of these grey things.

His mother came in and didnt have a clue he was actually the first ever !
Nowadays Blastoises are everywhere, but its a big pain to turn from something small to something that big!

>

I give it 10/10 well done

soooooooooooooo funny! Sequal! Sequal!
*several hours later*
Sequal! Sequal! Sequal!