hahaha...I'm gonna wet myself.........spssssspspspssss...ahhh......funny kepp goin'!

^what he said!!super-funny,keep it up

9.6/10

heres part ten, thanks for the reviews:


Jamie and misty walked in to camp, jamie set martin down on the ground and walked over to brocks tent,

hahahaha...that was a good one.........o,wait,they all r


9.8/10

thanks darkmage

welcome,2x4

hahaha! Love the 'THEY THEY!' bit! Xelent

heres part eleven sorry it's late i havent had a lot of spare time, also keep them reviews comin:

As they entered cerulean, they were discussing where to go first,

00000000.....kadabra

8.7/10

Getting more and more interesting.

/5

heres part twelve, thanks for the reviews:


Martin and jamie were running through the forest as fast as they could with their eevees, kadabra and haunter following them, they then came upon a clearing, it looked like a bomb had hit it, the grass was scorched and the trees were burned to a crisp, and then jamie spotted someone lying on the ground jamie rushed over to see who it was,

errrm,deadness,kreepy


9.25/10

heres part thirteen, thanks for the reviews:

Jamie appeared behind martin,

god,id forgotten the jessie&james theme song!!!and i love the classic blasting off again!!


9.61/10

heres part fourteen, keep them reviews comin:

Jamie appeared outside the hospital,

0_0 sharing a room,i dont wanna know whats gonna happen there


9.25/10

nothings gonna happen don't worry , well nothing lemon or ****** anyway

heres part fifteen, thanks for the reviews:

As jamie walked into ash

delia is a little wierd,just like ash lol

9.50/10

heres part sixteen, thanks for the reviews darkmage:

Jamie walked into the pokemoncenter, and saw misty sat down talking to martin, she then looked up and saw jamie,

Whoo, keep goin this is wicked, whoo

haha,thats funny,but i dont think brock could ever get a date

heres part seventeen, keep dem reviews comin:

excellent......9.23 / 10

0_0.oh my

9.50/10