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vaporterra
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Joined: Wed Dec 29, 2010 6:42 pm Posts: 443 Location: North America
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One thing very few people know about me (and even fewer on this website) know about me is that I'm an avid songwriter. Age old story of someone with big dreams but is starting out small. Bu anyway this is the first song I wrote back in my freshman year of high school. It's called Shooting Star. I wrote it about this one girl. Lookin’ at the night sky I wonder why We are looking for shooting stars I mean, we have each other Both of our wishes have already come true And we don’t need no fancy rings or cars Never the less, the sky’s so pretty You can’t enjoy this beauty in the city But the stars don’t compare When we look at each other and stare
You shine so bright in the moonlight And you glow in the daylight You give me the strength and courage to carry on You’re optimistic and carefree And beautiful, obviously You make the world brighter wherever you are Your my shooting star
Forget about worries For you that comes so easily No need to hurry Slow down, enjoy the scenery To tell you the truth I can’t enjoy it as much as I enjoy you Your radiance is abundant even when the day is through
You shine so bright in the moonlight And you glow in the daylight You give me the strength and courage to carry on You’re optimistic and carefree And beautiful, obviously You make the world brighter where ever you are Your my shooting star
You’ve granted my every wish laughter, serenity, happiness A shooting star can’t hold a candle to you You shine brighter than the sun, yes you do
You shine so bright in the moonlight And you glow in the daylight You give me the strength and courage to carry on You’re optimistic and carefree And beautiful, obviously You make the world brighter where ever you are Your my shooting star You shine so bright in the moonlight And you glow in the daylight You give me the strength and courage to carry on You’re optimistic and carefree And beautiful, obviously You make the world brighter where ever you are Your my shooting star
Make a wish Cuz mine has already come true Thanks to you....
Hope you guys liked it. Tell me what you think. Any comments, compliments, advice, anything is appreciated. Just as long as it's not hurtful. I'm all good with constructive critisism I know I'm not perfect. Thanks for reading.
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Mon Jul 16, 2012 1:17 pm |
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Dragonair101
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Sun Jun 27, 2010 4:58 pm Posts: 238 Location: Beach City
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These lyrics are great. I'm no music critic, but most songs right now have barely any lyrics (and when there are there are often only a couple of lines). I wish I could listen to this to the actual music...
_________________sad but rad
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Mon Jul 30, 2012 6:37 pm |
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vaporterra
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Joined: Wed Dec 29, 2010 6:42 pm Posts: 443 Location: North America
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Thank you. Yeah eventually if I can get some music to go with the songs I write that'd be great but I don't really have any music programs on my computer or anything so I don't know where I would start. I'll try to figure something out.
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Wed Aug 01, 2012 8:36 am |
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James86134
I got -10200 in Jeopardy
Joined: Thu Dec 06, 2012 8:31 pm Posts: 714 Location: Obsessing over my paper cranes (props to whoever gets this reference, no one will)
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This is beautiful. I may be young and the stereotype for my age is to like songs full of vulgarity or no lyrics but I miss the songs of the 1980s where they have lyrics of love and actually mean something instead of crap like 'Bangarang' or 'Shots'
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