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black_flygon
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Fri Mar 04, 2005 5:20 pm Posts: 590 Location: meh...xico
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Chapter Guide! (with page listing!) ((for those who do know the game, first ill go to mercury and imil before kolima))
1: The Disaster - Page 1
2: Three Years Later... - Page 1
3: Mysterious Cataclysm
4: The Grand Quest
5: The Stealing Trio
6: Ivan's Path
7: Mysterious Goma Cave
8: The Curse
9: Heading North
10: Imil's Sickness
11: The Lighthouse
12: Back to Biliban
13: Kolima?
14: Heme's healing power
15: The Way to Fuschin
16: Grotto Falls Course, The Mighty Ki Test
17: The Ape's track
18: Chi
19: Feizhi's Worry
20: Statues anyone?
21: Ancient Tiled Floor
22: Ivan's...related to Hamma?
23: Mirage?
24: The Manticore
25: Worring for Master Hammet
26: Rest trip
27: Going Back Home
28: Back on the Adventure
29: The Missing Lucky Charm
30: Kraken
31: Magic Lemurian Water
32: You Cheater!
33: Final Colosso Battle
34: Babi's Errand
35: Suhalla's Soldiers
36: Tornadoes?
37: Crosbone Isle
38: Lalivero
39: Ruins under Babi's Lighthouse
(^^39 is where i am in the game!, a few more chapters, and it's the end of game one, then game 2 will come in. WARN: game two will have other principal characters!)
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Chapter 1: The Disaster
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black_flygon
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Fri Mar 04, 2005 5:20 pm Posts: 590 Location: meh...xico
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((this is being under repair, so ill edit in later chapter 2))
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Goldenprince
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Joined: Sun Jun 26, 2005 6:03 pm Posts: 320 Location: NOTHING
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hmm...nice story...8.7/10
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Fri Jul 01, 2005 8:47 pm |
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black_flygon
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Fri Mar 04, 2005 5:20 pm Posts: 590 Location: meh...xico
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ok people, i deleted those 2 chapters, made them longer, and actually made them better, and every chapter will have a small picture during the adventure, so you get the idea...
chapter 1 is up, and number 2 is coming!!
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Sun Jul 03, 2005 7:51 pm |
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waterbou
Dragon Tamer
Joined: Mon Jun 27, 2005 7:36 am Posts: 123
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um....isn't this exactly like Golden Sun?
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black_flygon
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Fri Mar 04, 2005 5:20 pm Posts: 590 Location: meh...xico
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waterbou wrote: um....isn't this exactly like Golden Sun?
GS means Golden Sun waterbou!!!!!!
I'm actually doing this for me to write (not my) story to waste up my summer and for non-golden sun fans to know the story (with some stuff made up by me....like fights and Isaac ACTUALLY speaking so i gave him dialogues, it's the story, but with slight adjustments....plus i like doing graphics and look at the chapter image!! they're kewl!!)
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Goldenprince
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woo...thanks for the story ..
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Sun Jul 03, 2005 10:51 pm |
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black_flygon
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Fri Mar 04, 2005 5:20 pm Posts: 590 Location: meh...xico
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was that a sarcasm waterou!!??
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Sun Jul 03, 2005 11:08 pm |
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Goldenprince
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black_flygon wrote: was that a sarcasm waterou!!?? what do u mean sarcasm???am i mean or something?if i am..sorry..
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Sun Jul 03, 2005 11:13 pm |
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black_flygon
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Fri Mar 04, 2005 5:20 pm Posts: 590 Location: meh...xico
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Goldenprince wrote: black_flygon wrote: was that a sarcasm waterou!!?? what do u mean sarcasm???am i mean or something?if i am..sorry..
oh ok...i trust yer word....its just it sounded like one...the dotz made it sound like one... (this dotz don't mean im saying a sarcasm...dotz...)
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Sun Jul 03, 2005 11:28 pm |
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Goldenprince
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black_flygon wrote: Goldenprince wrote: black_flygon wrote: was that a sarcasm waterou!!?? what do u mean sarcasm???am i mean or something?if i am..sorry..
oh ok...i trust yer word....its just it sounded like one...the dotz made it sound like one... (this dotz don't mean im saying a sarcasm...dotz...)
sorry...but for some reason i cant stop typing the dotz unless im replying to a administrator. the only time i saw myself not type dotz was when i was replying to Tonberryking. I dont know why i type dotz...but i cant help it .sorry...
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Sun Jul 03, 2005 11:54 pm |
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black_flygon
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Fri Mar 04, 2005 5:20 pm Posts: 590 Location: meh...xico
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Goldenprince wrote: black_flygon wrote: Goldenprince wrote: black_flygon wrote: was that a sarcasm waterou!!?? what do u mean sarcasm???am i mean or something?if i am..sorry..
oh ok...i trust yer word....its just it sounded like one...the dotz made it sound like one... (this dotz don't mean im saying a sarcasm...dotz...)
sorry...but for some reason i cant stop typing the dotz unless im replying to a administrator. the only time i saw myself not type dotz was when i was replying to Tonberryking. I dont know why i type dotz...but i cant help it .sorry...
me neither... (also look at my stories'dialogues, lotzys of dotzys... )
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Mon Jul 04, 2005 7:36 am |
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waterbou
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Well I was just wondering if you intended it to be the EXACT story. You gunna do the lost age too?
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Mon Jul 04, 2005 8:27 am |
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black_flygon
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Fri Mar 04, 2005 5:20 pm Posts: 590 Location: meh...xico
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waterbou wrote: Well I was just wondering if you intended it to be the EXACT story. You gunna do the lost age too?
exact story, and yes...*shrugs* its gonna be long!!!....i doing right now chapter 2 (covers from the isaac mending the roof un til they enter the stone of sages) and chapter 3 all the saturos and menardi suff, and how i a organizing ONE game, it will be like....38 chapters, and the second game is even longer!!!!
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Mon Jul 04, 2005 11:22 am |
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black_flygon
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Fri Mar 04, 2005 5:20 pm Posts: 590 Location: meh...xico
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((# 2 took approx 3 hours!!! it is way long!! its 14 MCWORD pages long t size 12!!! ))
Chapter 2: Three Years Later
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Thu Jul 07, 2005 4:04 pm |
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SwellowLuvr
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Joined: Tue Jul 05, 2005 11:23 am Posts: 296 Location: Saturn
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Pretty cool. Is real long though, which might throw some people off from reading it, but in my opinion, the long ones are usually the best.
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Psychic Master
Psychic Trainer
Joined: Sun Jan 09, 2005 12:46 am Posts: 92 Location: Kuching
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I like this story a lot especially the Psyenergy part because something that have connection with psychic is my favourite. black_flygon,could you make more types of Psyenergies in the next story?That will be cool and awesome!The Sol and Luna idea came from Lunatone and Solrock,right?
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Arne
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Joined: Sun Sep 11, 2005 5:46 am Posts: 9 Location: Somewhere... in this world...
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Are you really going to write the entire story? Because i know it 's really long. (Yes, i 'm a GS fan!)
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dragonfan149
Pokemon Ranger
Joined: Tue Dec 28, 2004 1:30 pm Posts: 806 Location: PDX
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Nemocracy.
LoCkEd
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