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Pokemon Movile the curse of Kadabra!
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Pokemon Movile the curse of Kadabra!
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Gym Leader   Joined: Sat Apr 30, 2005 1:45 pm Posts: 331 
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I will add more parts for this story so dont keep waiting
Once upon a time there was a pokemon,a white bird pokemon with the power to control,Ice,Water and Air. In the middle ages people called this pokemon Lugor as in"guardian of the seas" Lugor as now they call Lugia had a battle a long time ago with the pokemon of disaster Inishida as now they call him Absol. The catastrophy pokemon "Absol" has beaten Lugia and send him to the frozen Alima lake. Alima lake was a lake with ice a lake that is cold that a creature in the water there freezes into a huge Ice cube,that is what happened to lugia. Last edited by Lintaro on Thu Jul 21, 2005 10:15 am, edited 1 time in total. |
| Sun Jul 03, 2005 2:02 pm |
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Gym Leader  Joined: Sat Feb 12, 2005 5:21 pm Posts: 3128 Location: College
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Lintaro, this is the best story I've ever read.
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| Sun Jul 03, 2005 2:06 pm |
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Ace Trainer   Joined: Wed May 11, 2005 9:31 am Posts: 285 Location: None available
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I can't wait for more exciting adventures with Lugia.
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| Sun Jul 03, 2005 2:20 pm |
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Pokemon Ranger   Joined: Sat Dec 18, 2004 7:10 pm Posts: 740 Location: Houston, TX
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This story literally blew me away. It's like Star Wars Episode III; you walk away saying wow. I mean seriously, WOW. Jeez, write some more! I can't wait for the next chapter.
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| Sun Jul 03, 2005 3:32 pm |
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Dragon Tamer   Joined: Sun Apr 10, 2005 3:17 pm Posts: 112 Location: Good Question!
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that was so beautiful
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| Sun Jul 03, 2005 4:06 pm |
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Gym Leader Joined: Sat Apr 30, 2005 1:45 pm Posts: 331
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Wow thanks!
As lugia was frozen during the years,he began to search for power! Then at one night a man crawls in the shadows,waiting for anyone to make a move,suddenly.....go  and  !!!
The man called out his pokemon,then officer jenny came she battles him with her charizard! Espeon use psychic!!!Umbreon use shadow ball!!!! Charizard couldnt make a move with umbreons and espeons combination attack! Then a kid comes,hey you! The kid takes out his grovyle and steps into action. Grovyle leaf blade! Grovyle done some serius damage on umbreon! Espeon use psychic! Espeon did super effective damage on Grovyle since he is a grass type!! No Grovyle! He he you dont have what it takes kid! Suddenly.........strange winds came blowing right to the man! Perfect,my prize Absol! As Absol appeared from nowhere he jumps into action and preapares a razor wind to the man! -to be continued- |
| Sun Jul 03, 2005 4:47 pm |
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Frontier Brain   Joined: Fri Feb 18, 2005 6:12 pm Posts: 1118 Location: We're not Cleveland!
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Instant best seller!
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| Sun Jul 03, 2005 4:47 pm |
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Ace Trainer Joined: Wed May 11, 2005 9:31 am Posts: 285 Location: None available
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Event better than the last one, I give it 5/5
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| Sun Jul 03, 2005 4:52 pm |
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Gym Leader Joined: Sat Feb 12, 2005 5:21 pm Posts: 3128 Location: College
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Leona, only a 5/5? I'd easily give this an 8/5, maybe even a 9/5! Keep up the great work!
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| Sun Jul 03, 2005 4:58 pm |
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Psypoke Legend   Joined: Wed Aug 04, 2004 3:28 am Posts: 440 Location: New Zealand
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Lintaro wrote: As Absol appeared from nowhere he jumps into action and preapares a razor wind to the man! -to be continued- Oh man! I can't wait to find out what happens next!! |
| Sun Jul 03, 2005 5:02 pm |
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Frontier Brain Joined: Fri Feb 18, 2005 6:12 pm Posts: 1118 Location: We're not Cleveland!
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Amphy wrote: Lintaro wrote: As Absol appeared from nowhere he jumps into action and preapares a razor wind to the man! -to be continued- Oh man! I can't wait to find out what happens next!! I know man. The suspense is just killing me! _________________ =02:47:08= <pop10> probably means your staff or soethingwich in that case i could getyou fired or i could report to nintendo how bad of website you run because you dont follow your own rules on the chats |
| Sun Jul 03, 2005 5:04 pm |
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Ace Trainer  Joined: Sat Jun 04, 2005 12:47 am Posts: 250 Location: New Zealand
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WoW AMAZING keep the story coming Lintaro
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| Sun Jul 03, 2005 5:04 pm |
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Ace Trainer  Joined: Tue Jun 28, 2005 12:17 pm Posts: 423
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Yeah, this story is just amazing! Please, I need to hear more!
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| Sun Jul 03, 2005 5:11 pm |
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Bug Catcher   Joined: Sat Jul 02, 2005 9:03 pm Posts: 6
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well i joined psypoke for the pokedex, but the stories are awsome too
seems that the people at the top of the pokemon universe should hire some kids like this to write pokemon movies, and not those cheesy hollywood weirdos! |
| Sun Jul 03, 2005 5:20 pm |
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Lite Four   Joined: Wed Aug 04, 2004 8:31 am Posts: 490 Location: hecho en mexico
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OH... MY... GOD. I love this story. This story has to be the most exciting thing I have ever read in my lifetime.
And the second part?! BLEW ME AWAY! All I can say is wow, dude. |
| Sun Jul 03, 2005 5:26 pm |
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Gym Leader Joined: Sat Apr 30, 2005 1:45 pm Posts: 331
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The razor winds were to powerful leaving the man with serius damage!
GRRRR....I will get you Absol  -lutly I will get you!
Then the man escaped leaving no trail. Meanwhile at Alima lake Lugia wanted power and more power but he fails to get out of the icecube. That evening Absol finds itself at the mountains,.......woooosh! Latios and Latias apeared! Latias:dont dare you amke catastrophies! Absol:hm............ Absol charged its razor wind and charged into action! Latios:look out latias! Latias:argghhh I'm hit! Absol used tornado,as the the tornado stroke the mountain began to broke! -to be continued!- |
| Sun Jul 03, 2005 5:30 pm |
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Gym Leader Joined: Sat Feb 12, 2005 5:21 pm Posts: 3128 Location: College
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This story just gets better and better, you are the next Stephan King!
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| Sun Jul 03, 2005 5:35 pm |
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Ace Trainer  Joined: Sun Jan 02, 2005 12:08 pm Posts: 347 Location: Good Ol' USA
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wow the character development is amazing. i didn't known that latias and latios were such great compatriots lookin out for each other like that.
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| Sun Jul 03, 2005 5:37 pm |
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Bug Catcher  Joined: Wed Jun 29, 2005 2:37 pm Posts: 1
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God...It's....it's.....it's....There are no words to describe it!...It's soo good!
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| Sun Jul 03, 2005 5:40 pm |
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Ace Trainer Joined: Wed May 11, 2005 9:31 am Posts: 285 Location: None available
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You could have a career doing this in later life. J.k Rowling has nothing on you Lintaro! & you're so fast at it too
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| Sun Jul 03, 2005 5:41 pm |
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Bug Catcher  Joined: Sun Jul 03, 2005 5:38 pm Posts: 2
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man, this is the best story ever. i'm gonna check all the time! I LURVE YOU!
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| Sun Jul 03, 2005 5:43 pm |
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The Geek   Joined: Wed Aug 04, 2004 11:10 am Posts: 1535 Location: Milliways
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This is.. amazing. I mean, the imagery, it's stunning. I feel like I'm living this story; like I'm right there with them all. The way you've used the written word, the power of it all... I'm stunned, at a loss for words. This is, undoubtedly, one of the best stories I've ever heard. You NEED to publish this.
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| Sun Jul 03, 2005 6:12 pm |
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Pokemon Ranger Joined: Sat Dec 18, 2004 7:10 pm Posts: 740 Location: Houston, TX
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You have a gift. An incredible gift for writing. The suspense, the drama, the imagery. Definatly 200% material. The personification, this story reeks of greatness.
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| Sun Jul 03, 2005 9:53 pm |
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Ace Trainer  Joined: Sun Jun 26, 2005 6:03 pm Posts: 320 Location: NOTHING
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cmon!!!keep going...continue the story!!gwaaa..im getting bored waiting for the end...but nice story anyway..
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| Sun Jul 03, 2005 10:44 pm |
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Dragon Tamer  Joined: Sun May 15, 2005 12:28 pm Posts: 191 Location: Location Location
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Dude this story is so awesome, that when I read it I just went "Wow". Then I exploded because of the awesomeness that this story contains.
Lintaro, you are my hero! _________________ 98% of the teenage population have pasted random statistics into their sig. If you are one of the 2% that hasn't, paste this into your sig. |
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