There once was A man named Kru. He was known as one of the Poke-hackers. The Pokehackers were a clan of mysterious evil beings, like humans, but half pokemon. The Poke-hackers were in-touch with their poke-powers, and and used them to benefit themselves.They could hack into any electronic source, due to their elemental powers. Soon, Many of them Hacked into Mainframes of Worldwide missle Silo's and Started Nuclear wars.

But There was on Poke-hacker to stop them all. One to Bring Peace back to the world.One to save Everybody. He was Kru.

Twhoom! Thwoom! A Solarbeam Whizzed out of the plant-like hands of a grass Pokehacker, straight at Kru, from the other side of the Train. He retaliated by flying back at it on his dragon Wings And slashing it with a deadly Dragon claw.The Hacker fell back, Red stains mixing with it's Green Scaly Skin creating a deep, Purple.

He sat down on top of the boxcar. He didn't want to be a pokehacker. He didn't want to be hated.He wanted all of it to stop. That's why he has going to the time machine in The UK to go back in time and stop that meteor from ever hitting earth and that would stop the pokehackers from ever coming near earth.That would save the world. That would stop everything. No more wars, no more death, just an easy life on the meteor, andEarth would remain untouched.

Soon coming Part Two-Dragon vs. Dragon!

Whoa this is really good

8/10

Part 2- Dragon vs. Dragon!!

Kru decided that Flying would be faster, and Flew forward. He Flapped his Dragonite wings and zommed ahead of the train. As soon as he left the trains view, a Pokehacker Resembling an Altaria zoomed down on him and performed a Dragonbreath. He took the Hit hard, but bounced back and Fired a Flamethrower. It niched the man and it Burned his cloud like skin. After he tackled Kru and With a deafening punch, performed an earthquake. Then he keeled over in agony due to the burn. He kicked the man into the hole in the earth and used strength to close the hole back up. He Noticed a card on the Ground. It said,

TO POKEHACKER A13G6

You are to join you're regemeant in the attack on Goldenrod City in 0900 hours. The army is ready and we need you're help taking down the radiotower. Fter we gain control of the radiotower, we will send out a subliminal reading that will cause insanity, and the world will belong to pokehackers. Then we will grow the intensity of the radiowaves, killing all humans.

See You in 0900 hours,
General Deoxy

this is good 8/ 10