YAY! Someone liked it!

I have a few problems with the way your using midnight... First off, how exactly are we rivals of Team Magma?? Fire/Ground/Steel/Rock v.s. Dark/Poison/Ghost/Dragon just doesn't equal rivalry to me... Second off, by the time Midnight was created Magma was finished (Groudon problems...) sorry but that's just alittle things of mine for an up coming fanfic. Another thing, Team Midnight members never use their real name, just another little thing of mine for the fanfic.

But it's your story, you can do what you want, just don't let Midnight get their ass kicked.

PS: Next time anyone askes to use Team Midnight in a fanfic, please tell me what you plan to do with the team.

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Really interesting, keep on going. I have a feeling this story is going to turn out very good.

Thanks for all the comments: here is Part 2:
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Chapter 4 - Decisions and Consequences (Part 2)

Joshua had been on Sky for more than 3 hours. He was freezing and soaked to the bone. Sky was also getting tired, but all the longs hours of vigorous training seemed to have payed off. Joshua bent down to Sky's ear and said, "Okay, you can land now! We need some rest!"

Sky, wanting the rest, instantly flew down toward the ground and landed. Joshua jumped off and fell down out of exaustion and "wobbly legs". Once Joshua recovered, he took in his surroundings. He was in the middle of a forest. The treetops totally blocked out the sky except for the little patch that Swellow had come through.

The floor of the forest was littered with leaves and acorns. After taking in his surroundings, Joshua took out his PokeNav and looked at the map to where they were. They were in Yushi Forest, just south of Sparkity City.

The second Joshua saw Sparkity City, he jumped up in happiness. He could see his father, but then he remebered about what had happened that very day. He had killed his best-friend's pokemon, but then he hadn't. He didn't know what had come over him. Now, he was a fugitive running from the law.

Oh well, I'm used to being by myself, so I guess I'll just deal with it, he thought, but I do need to find somewhere to rest my pokemon

After much thinking, Joshua decided to go to Sparkity, but he had to get a disquise. He started walking to look for one when all of the sudden, an acorn just fell down right in front of him and then instantly grew to become a bigger acorn. There were more acorns falling and growing.

Joshua looked closely at the little ones before they grew, and he recogninzed them instantly, they were s! And then when they hit the ground, they evolved into . But these s were different in a way. Maybe it was their eyes. The usual bluish-green was now a orangish-red. Joshua didn't like it so he ran away from the multitude of . But before he could get away, they all used Razor Leaf.

"Sky! Hurry and uses Gust!" yelled Joshua desperatly.

But Sky was too slow, so the Razor Leafs hit both the trainer and the pokemon and gave them scratches and cuts everywhere. From shock and pain, the both instantly passed out.
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Oh my head! Oh, my aching head thought Joshua as he revived and sat up. where am I?

Suddenly all the images came flooding back to him and he remembered that he was hurt by a bunch of .

srry, don't want to finish now, but there is some for you.

y y? the cliffhangers

pretty good so far but i dont see y the "spell" is affecting pokemon he hasnt realy in contact with for more than a minute and hist pokemon grow into it steadily

Hurray for necromancy!

but anyway, it